for Does This Make You Uncomfortable?2/20/2009 c1 Caroline Viteri
Aww that's cute. :) Nice little game they were playing there. Makes me wish something like that would happen in real life. xD
Aww that's cute. :) Nice little game they were playing there. Makes me wish something like that would happen in real life. xD
2/16/2009 c1 Natasha
This is so adorable!
This is so adorable!
2/13/2009 c1 Raux
Incredibly cute!
It's also very clever. I would have never thought of writing something like this.
Oh, the beauty of the written word, haha.
Awesome work!
-Emer.
Incredibly cute!
It's also very clever. I would have never thought of writing something like this.
Oh, the beauty of the written word, haha.
Awesome work!
-Emer.
1/26/2009 c1 
3fymd-mk
i love that game! and i love this! it was so cute, im not a big fan of that point of view, but it worked really well in this story. anyways, adorable, loved it, favourite :)
3fymd-mki love that game! and i love this! it was so cute, im not a big fan of that point of view, but it worked really well in this story. anyways, adorable, loved it, favourite :)
1/4/2009 c1 2long live the geeks
This story or what ever you want to call it was cute. It was one of tose things that puts a smile on someones face and makes them laugh at the crazyness of it even though it could happen. Sorry im rambling but it was really good.
2long live the geeksThis story or what ever you want to call it was cute. It was one of tose things that puts a smile on someones face and makes them laugh at the crazyness of it even though it could happen. Sorry im rambling but it was really good.
1/2/2009 c1 thedilettante27
whoa. [*.*]
that was awesome . . .
it was steaming! . . got my heart racing. xP
and adorable one-shot!
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whoa. [*.*]
that was awesome . . .
it was steaming! . . got my heart racing. xP
and adorable one-shot!
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12/31/2008 c1 24Sorrow's Smile
this story makes me uncomfortable...in a delightful, cute, fluffy way. Love it!
24Sorrow's Smilethis story makes me uncomfortable...in a delightful, cute, fluffy way. Love it!
12/30/2008 c1 2Violet Thelaw
Aww! Such a cute story :D I rarely read one shots for the fear of wanting more haha XD and now I want more!
2Violet ThelawAww! Such a cute story :D I rarely read one shots for the fear of wanting more haha XD and now I want more!
12/28/2008 c1 Chasing Skylines
Haha, that was a nice, fluffy one-shot.
I liked pretty much all of it; the interaction between the two is hilarious.
Another thing I liked was how you managed to get a lot in in a short chapter while not rushing it.
-Review Marathon, link in profile
Haha, that was a nice, fluffy one-shot.
I liked pretty much all of it; the interaction between the two is hilarious.
Another thing I liked was how you managed to get a lot in in a short chapter while not rushing it.
-Review Marathon, link in profile
12/27/2008 c1 1bittersweet priestess
Nothing short of amazing! It made me all fluffy and sappy and all sorts of this happy, giddy feeling you get when you've just read an something as awesome as this. :) Good job! :D
1bittersweet priestessNothing short of amazing! It made me all fluffy and sappy and all sorts of this happy, giddy feeling you get when you've just read an something as awesome as this. :) Good job! :D