for One Look11/18/2007 c1 
64glimpses from an ivory tower
Firstly, thank you for the review on Vermilion, and I'm sorry it took me so long to get back to you.
"And we talk
And you laugh
And I love."
The simplicity of these last lines won me over. Nicely written, but you might experiment with the way you break up stanzas and lines to add interest to the poem.
64glimpses from an ivory towerFirstly, thank you for the review on Vermilion, and I'm sorry it took me so long to get back to you.
"And we talk
And you laugh
And I love."
The simplicity of these last lines won me over. Nicely written, but you might experiment with the way you break up stanzas and lines to add interest to the poem.
11/1/2007 c1 Jasmine
W.O.W! lol well that pretty much sums it up! awesome poem! love the emotion!
W.O.W! lol well that pretty much sums it up! awesome poem! love the emotion!
11/1/2007 c1 Stephanie
Even more about how i feel about him
Good poam(i think i spelt that wrong)
Even more about how i feel about him
Good poam(i think i spelt that wrong)
10/31/2007 c1 11VegasGoddess
You know, I think you are going to give me a hear attack with these love poems! I want more of them, in case you didn't know! ;-)
Great job, I loved it.
And, I still do wonder. I think there are going to be some questions being asked tomorrow...
Excellent, as always.
♥~Grissom's Sweetheart~♥
11VegasGoddessYou know, I think you are going to give me a hear attack with these love poems! I want more of them, in case you didn't know! ;-)
Great job, I loved it.
And, I still do wonder. I think there are going to be some questions being asked tomorrow...
Excellent, as always.
♥~Grissom's Sweetheart~♥
10/29/2007 c1 43SpookyJezy
This is honestly cute. :]]
It reminds me of how I felt when I met my ex.
And how I still feel about him.
It also reminds me of a poem he
wrote me the otherday.
=/
weird but this is very sweet keep up the good work
43SpookyJezyThis is honestly cute. :]]
It reminds me of how I felt when I met my ex.
And how I still feel about him.
It also reminds me of a poem he
wrote me the otherday.
=/
weird but this is very sweet keep up the good work