for The White Sleep8/7/2009 c3 Shadow Kissed Twilight
I love it so far. Completely original and awesome. :)
I see some errors and I hope you don't mind that I am going to point them out. Mainly just punctuation or spelling.
Chapter 1- I grabbed to plates, setting them on the little
Chapter 2- the bathroom; teach, hair, and body
I caugh stares from
with rows of dseks facing a largeer one
Mr. byrd
It was pretty basic, straighforward.
"I don't think so,'
His grip on my hsoulder tightened.
"That means I cn take
kids had giben me
body hurt,and I
I dind't really have
a dream.,
Those are the small ones that I caught. Nothing big. As I said before, I like it alot so far and would love for ya'll to continue it. Why has it not been updated in so long? It is really quite good.
Anyway, be safe and please update when ya'll can.
-SKT
I love it so far. Completely original and awesome. :)
I see some errors and I hope you don't mind that I am going to point them out. Mainly just punctuation or spelling.
Chapter 1- I grabbed to plates, setting them on the little
Chapter 2- the bathroom; teach, hair, and body
I caugh stares from
with rows of dseks facing a largeer one
Mr. byrd
It was pretty basic, straighforward.
"I don't think so,'
His grip on my hsoulder tightened.
"That means I cn take
kids had giben me
body hurt,and I
I dind't really have
a dream.,
Those are the small ones that I caught. Nothing big. As I said before, I like it alot so far and would love for ya'll to continue it. Why has it not been updated in so long? It is really quite good.
Anyway, be safe and please update when ya'll can.
-SKT
12/17/2008 c3 
9Cheese Addicts
This is such an awesome story!
But you guys haven't updated in such a long time =(
Update quickly please!
I want to know what happens to Eira =D
9Cheese AddictsThis is such an awesome story!
But you guys haven't updated in such a long time =(
Update quickly please!
I want to know what happens to Eira =D
6/27/2008 c3 20kiiwiikraze
Ohh, I really like this story so far!
Aha, Eira is really funny, in a weird, sarcastic way.
The story, overall, is amazing.
I really like it, : )
next chapter? : D
20kiiwiikrazeOhh, I really like this story so far!
Aha, Eira is really funny, in a weird, sarcastic way.
The story, overall, is amazing.
I really like it, : )
next chapter? : D
1/18/2008 c3 3RebelianAngel
This should be entertaining. I can't wait to see how the rest of school goes for her. I must say that you are a gifted writer, and that you should most definately keep it up. I will be waiting for an update. A faithrul reader and fellow writer, Aadi. =^_^=
3RebelianAngelThis should be entertaining. I can't wait to see how the rest of school goes for her. I must say that you are a gifted writer, and that you should most definately keep it up. I will be waiting for an update. A faithrul reader and fellow writer, Aadi. =^_^=
1/11/2008 c2 Enaid
m grilled cheese its rlly good w/ ketsup by the way. though ppl make fun of me lol. anywhoo great story its rlly interesting well im off to read more
m grilled cheese its rlly good w/ ketsup by the way. though ppl make fun of me lol. anywhoo great story its rlly interesting well im off to read more
12/18/2007 c3 26Atamagaokashii Ookami
that's awesome, and amazingly interesting!
it's cool the way you have the different races arranged XD
hoep you update soon!
26Atamagaokashii Ookamithat's awesome, and amazingly interesting!
it's cool the way you have the different races arranged XD
hoep you update soon!
11/19/2007 c3 4Kittensinthedustbin
Ni,ni! Awesome, I feel like I was in school alongside Eira! XD You used my favorite demon's name XD Leviathan! And such a cool nickname for him too! XD I love Hayden, she seems like she'll be an interesting character to follow, along with that Edom guy. Can't wait for the next chapter!
~Kittens
4KittensinthedustbinNi,ni! Awesome, I feel like I was in school alongside Eira! XD You used my favorite demon's name XD Leviathan! And such a cool nickname for him too! XD I love Hayden, she seems like she'll be an interesting character to follow, along with that Edom guy. Can't wait for the next chapter!
~Kittens
11/11/2007 c2 3psykoteddy
I love it! I like fantasy in general, but realistic's my favorite. Plus, this doesn't exactly seem to be following the usual "guidelines" for fantasy- whoo-hoo! And, one question: would you define Eira's powers as esp or sight-linker? (My term for people who can connect people or things to their owners, etc. with powers-I have a friend like that)
3psykoteddyI love it! I like fantasy in general, but realistic's my favorite. Plus, this doesn't exactly seem to be following the usual "guidelines" for fantasy- whoo-hoo! And, one question: would you define Eira's powers as esp or sight-linker? (My term for people who can connect people or things to their owners, etc. with powers-I have a friend like that)
11/3/2007 c2 Dresdonfan
Wow, I really like it. Please update as soon as you can. This stry is pretty freakin' awesome so far.
Wow, I really like it. Please update as soon as you can. This stry is pretty freakin' awesome so far.
11/2/2007 c2 4Kittensinthedustbin
XD This is so interesting. I like Eria already. Her powers are cool too! I can't wait till she goes to the school, this is going to be a good story. Keep writing! XD
-Kittens
4KittensinthedustbinXD This is so interesting. I like Eria already. Her powers are cool too! I can't wait till she goes to the school, this is going to be a good story. Keep writing! XD
-Kittens