for Being Alone1/11/2008 c1 
31Lurid Black
Sweet, really well written, it feels calm, I see no ways it could improve, keep writing!
~Lurid~
31Lurid BlackSweet, really well written, it feels calm, I see no ways it could improve, keep writing!
~Lurid~
10/30/2007 c1 2The Lady dreams Imagine
So bitter, but so true - people so often forget that love isn't everything. I'm glad you managed to express that well. Admittedly, your message would have more impact if there was not bitterness in your words; it's easy for a person who has been hurt and continues to be hurt to regard love as unimportant, but those same words from someone who can see both sides would mean more to other people.
But I love the last line. It's so straightforward. Thats the beauty of this.
2The Lady dreams ImagineSo bitter, but so true - people so often forget that love isn't everything. I'm glad you managed to express that well. Admittedly, your message would have more impact if there was not bitterness in your words; it's easy for a person who has been hurt and continues to be hurt to regard love as unimportant, but those same words from someone who can see both sides would mean more to other people.
But I love the last line. It's so straightforward. Thats the beauty of this.