9/4/2022 c10 Paul Marshall
My parents did not care, dad left a long time ago and mum just got drunk. Make My own sandwiches for school but that depended on food in the fridge. Most of the time i begged of others kids, sneakily, we shared a treat or something. Stole the very often school meal but looking back think the teachers knew and turned a blind eye. Loved science and sports but was not fit for sports only science. Science, would say it changed my life but as of being 50 years old it has not. Now just maybe, i could change everything and even frighten governments. I cannot be the only person who has seen the future. True agender, they sold us out
My parents did not care, dad left a long time ago and mum just got drunk. Make My own sandwiches for school but that depended on food in the fridge. Most of the time i begged of others kids, sneakily, we shared a treat or something. Stole the very often school meal but looking back think the teachers knew and turned a blind eye. Loved science and sports but was not fit for sports only science. Science, would say it changed my life but as of being 50 years old it has not. Now just maybe, i could change everything and even frighten governments. I cannot be the only person who has seen the future. True agender, they sold us out
8/23/2017 c17 Guest
Is this the end?
Is this the end?
4/1/2012 c1 Ms.Caterpillar
That poor baby... :(
That poor baby... :(
4/18/2010 c17 1twilight-pyrate
love the story...if that's what you could call this...if it's best off of real life.
brilliant everything, really, i enjoyed each chapter.
XOX
sila
love the story...if that's what you could call this...if it's best off of real life.
brilliant everything, really, i enjoyed each chapter.
XOX
sila
3/19/2010 c17 1Raiya-shi
I love your writing and the story thus far. Heart-wrenching at times (especially towards the beginning of the story) and the heart-warming at other times =D can't wait to continue, hope life is isn't being to mean to you these days, what with the baby sibling and the boyfriend (Declan complaining cause it was about his brother right? AN in 14/15 if you don't remember what I'm taking about)! *gives treats* Thank for upping and writing the story. Oh, and I read on your profile that you're writing a more adult version of the story, will you be uploading that on you profile as well? So, I'll 'sit tight' and be patient for updates =P Thanks again for RentBoy!
I love your writing and the story thus far. Heart-wrenching at times (especially towards the beginning of the story) and the heart-warming at other times =D can't wait to continue, hope life is isn't being to mean to you these days, what with the baby sibling and the boyfriend (Declan complaining cause it was about his brother right? AN in 14/15 if you don't remember what I'm taking about)! *gives treats* Thank for upping and writing the story. Oh, and I read on your profile that you're writing a more adult version of the story, will you be uploading that on you profile as well? So, I'll 'sit tight' and be patient for updates =P Thanks again for RentBoy!
2/16/2010 c17 StangenBaer
You have to update this!
I feel so bad that this is actually a true story, and you had to resolve to prostitution, but lots of hugs for your strength! :)
You have to update this!
I feel so bad that this is actually a true story, and you had to resolve to prostitution, but lots of hugs for your strength! :)
8/30/2009 c17 Metairie
Brilliant ... absolutely brilliant. I hope you will find the time to get back to this and finish it up. Your flow, characterization and dialogue are spot on and I love the interaction Ian has with others and his overall outlook on street life.
This is one of the few stories I've found that deal with the oppressive and depressive lifestyle that comes with being a street kid and doesn't glorify the corners and alleys.
Bravo and I will be keeping an eye out for more from you.
Matt
Brilliant ... absolutely brilliant. I hope you will find the time to get back to this and finish it up. Your flow, characterization and dialogue are spot on and I love the interaction Ian has with others and his overall outlook on street life.
This is one of the few stories I've found that deal with the oppressive and depressive lifestyle that comes with being a street kid and doesn't glorify the corners and alleys.
Bravo and I will be keeping an eye out for more from you.
Matt
7/18/2009 c17 Akuhyou
Man, I'm loving this story! Ian has had such a hard life but I'm glad that things are finally starting to look up for him and that he's working towards getting out of prostitution. I wonder who Ian's mystery client was... He kinda freaked me out. A graveyard, really? *shudders* Declan kinda reminds me of myself actually, cept I'm not a guy, but either way... I can't wait for future chapters.
Man, I'm loving this story! Ian has had such a hard life but I'm glad that things are finally starting to look up for him and that he's working towards getting out of prostitution. I wonder who Ian's mystery client was... He kinda freaked me out. A graveyard, really? *shudders* Declan kinda reminds me of myself actually, cept I'm not a guy, but either way... I can't wait for future chapters.
6/3/2009 c17 1CinderellaWithCombatBoots
I really love this story :] It's just so real and...awesome. Ian's a really great character who annoys you at times but you just can't help but like and be drawn toward him. I really miss Cassius and really want to get him brung back! Although at the same time I'm a bit curious as to see what Ian makes of Declan. But I still want to know what happened with the whole Cassius thing. You should know I'm impatient when I drink caffiene. So, I say you should know right now I'm drinking caffiene. Life can be so cliche, sometimes, huh? Never mind, I'm...off to go...shower. Ignore me. Your life will be easier that way.
I really love this story :] It's just so real and...awesome. Ian's a really great character who annoys you at times but you just can't help but like and be drawn toward him. I really miss Cassius and really want to get him brung back! Although at the same time I'm a bit curious as to see what Ian makes of Declan. But I still want to know what happened with the whole Cassius thing. You should know I'm impatient when I drink caffiene. So, I say you should know right now I'm drinking caffiene. Life can be so cliche, sometimes, huh? Never mind, I'm...off to go...shower. Ignore me. Your life will be easier that way.
5/25/2009 c17 6Penemuel
First of all, I would just like to say that this is an amazing story and really well-written. You have a lot of talent as a writer. I couldn't stop reading. In fact, I stayed up until 2 AM finishing this despite the fact that I have school today.
You have a lot of talent and I hope to continue this until the end. I look forward to all your future updates.
First of all, I would just like to say that this is an amazing story and really well-written. You have a lot of talent as a writer. I couldn't stop reading. In fact, I stayed up until 2 AM finishing this despite the fact that I have school today.
You have a lot of talent and I hope to continue this until the end. I look forward to all your future updates.
5/8/2009 c17 cocorolla
DAH I love this story, it's just that kind tht when you start reading it, you can't stop. w And your writing style is absolutely marvelous.
*headdesk* I really don't know what else to say besides Amazing stotry and keep up the good work! ^-^
DAH I love this story, it's just that kind tht when you start reading it, you can't stop. w And your writing style is absolutely marvelous.
*headdesk* I really don't know what else to say besides Amazing stotry and keep up the good work! ^-^
4/20/2009 c17 xxCandlelightxx
YOU ARE ARE TOTALLY AWESOME WRITER! I CANNOT WAIT UNTIL YOUR NEXT CHAPTER COMES UP
YOU ARE ARE TOTALLY AWESOME WRITER! I CANNOT WAIT UNTIL YOUR NEXT CHAPTER COMES UP
3/23/2009 c17 Valrie
Hahaha you stalked Declan's brother ! XD Ah Ireally laught a lot at "cute food" ! Jacky's cuter than the food XD Anyway I'm happy for you ! You finally have a cell ! :D:D:D ah I love it ! update soon please !
Valérie
Hahaha you stalked Declan's brother ! XD Ah Ireally laught a lot at "cute food" ! Jacky's cuter than the food XD Anyway I'm happy for you ! You finally have a cell ! :D:D:D ah I love it ! update soon please !
Valérie