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7IcanzIIravor
I loved this story. Loved Will's pluck, patience and determination. Fantastic story.
7IcanzIIravorI loved this story. Loved Will's pluck, patience and determination. Fantastic story.
7/25/2008 c3 M. R. Roland
oh my god! An absolutely wonderful story! Keep up the great writing, post something soon...
oh my god! An absolutely wonderful story! Keep up the great writing, post something soon...
11/9/2007 c3 lizabeth m. mercado
hey...just want you to know that your story was good...very very good...i love it man! honestly...its sort of short but its awesome...keep up the good work! goodluck on your next story...inform me please...if you have another thing going...!god bless you...
hey...just want you to know that your story was good...very very good...i love it man! honestly...its sort of short but its awesome...keep up the good work! goodluck on your next story...inform me please...if you have another thing going...!god bless you...
11/4/2007 c1 Guest
dude... wtf? mexico is outlaw country?
dude... wtf? mexico is outlaw country?
11/1/2007 c3 SummerBaby94
oh my gosh, they're gonna get married! are there going to be any chapters after this?
oh my gosh, they're gonna get married! are there going to be any chapters after this?