for Into My Father's Arms11/1/2007 c1 Bellanyx
This isn't too bad, but I find when you say "my father" a bit confusing- you should probably pick whether you want this in third or first person :)
Keep Writing!
This isn't too bad, but I find when you say "my father" a bit confusing- you should probably pick whether you want this in third or first person :)
Keep Writing!