for Two Years Ago11/4/2007 c1 
49viennacantabile
they always end up coming back, don't they? sigh.
i'd suggest picking one way of dealing with numbers (spelling it out or just using the numeral) and sticking to it, but the emotion really shines through in this poem. nice job. :D
49viennacantabilethey always end up coming back, don't they? sigh.
i'd suggest picking one way of dealing with numbers (spelling it out or just using the numeral) and sticking to it, but the emotion really shines through in this poem. nice job. :D
11/1/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Good poem. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a terrific day.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrGood poem. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a terrific day.
~Twilight Starr~
11/1/2007 c1 2Imaginary Strangers
How sad, but relatable. The people we long to get over usually end up coming back all the time for some reason. Probably for control. Good poem, though sad.
2Imaginary StrangersHow sad, but relatable. The people we long to get over usually end up coming back all the time for some reason. Probably for control. Good poem, though sad.