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2/24/2008 c1 joshgray
I liked this. I can identify with both the speaker and the person who left.

Is it okay if I forget to eat?

Is it okay if I forget to sleep?

Great lines. I think I understand where that stanza is coming from.

At the same time, I can't help but share a rapport with the other.

"You were always the type to want to fly away"

I wish I could.

Wonderful. Thanks you for writing this.
11/3/2007 c1 4Razel Trushan
Well done, it is something that can be related to, I only hope that you are not reaching into current experianced to get this muse.
11/2/2007 c1 Frozen.Angel.Tears
Beautiful, truely beautiful.
11/1/2007 c1 9Kaytala
Hey Darlin'! Thanks for the distraction from my relentless studying

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