for Empty Apartment2/8/2015 c1 
8PertuzD
... Oh, I love this...
It's full of passion! I like how you caught the emotions, and how you created a solid backstory out of pure casualty! Really, really liked it. Even like your choice of words!
To be honest, not much else is needed here, except maybe a happy ending, but that's up to imagination, no? I think the ending was perfect, though, and loved it just as much!
In any case, keep it up!
Signed,
Random story-lover!
8PertuzD... Oh, I love this...
It's full of passion! I like how you caught the emotions, and how you created a solid backstory out of pure casualty! Really, really liked it. Even like your choice of words!
To be honest, not much else is needed here, except maybe a happy ending, but that's up to imagination, no? I think the ending was perfect, though, and loved it just as much!
In any case, keep it up!
Signed,
Random story-lover!
2/12/2013 c1 yoojae
That was so sad! Omg D:
The empty apartment, whyyyy?! and even sadder still that he did not realize it. Too bad Thomas wasn't there to hear it, though I doubt it would have made much of a difference to their situation. Poor Greg. I feel so sad for the both of them.
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That was so sad! Omg D:
The empty apartment, whyyyy?! and even sadder still that he did not realize it. Too bad Thomas wasn't there to hear it, though I doubt it would have made much of a difference to their situation. Poor Greg. I feel so sad for the both of them.
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12/10/2011 c1 3Conspicuous Maliciousness
D8
*crawls into emocorner*
So so sad! I really like this! Man, this was so sad~!
I just dont even. Dx
3Conspicuous MaliciousnessD8
*crawls into emocorner*
So so sad! I really like this! Man, this was so sad~!
I just dont even. Dx
4/20/2010 c1 LittleMissMurdered
Aw, really? D: That's just sad. That's just sad. ): But a great ending. Added lots of affect. Kudos!
Aw, really? D: That's just sad. That's just sad. ): But a great ending. Added lots of affect. Kudos!
12/10/2009 c1 1andnobodysmokes
Oh my gosh. This broke my heart. It was brilliant and unexpected, tragic in a way only misunderstandings can be. I loved it, but I'm gonna have to go cry now.
1andnobodysmokesOh my gosh. This broke my heart. It was brilliant and unexpected, tragic in a way only misunderstandings can be. I loved it, but I'm gonna have to go cry now.
12/7/2009 c1 1stick and straw
I suspected that that was how it was going to end-with him talking to an empty room and not realizing it-but it was still heart-shattering to have those suspicions confirmed. Wonderful story, even though it was so very very sad. :( Keep up the good work.
1stick and strawI suspected that that was how it was going to end-with him talking to an empty room and not realizing it-but it was still heart-shattering to have those suspicions confirmed. Wonderful story, even though it was so very very sad. :( Keep up the good work.
8/19/2009 c1 8Jessiy
I liked this story. I feel it also gave me an insight into you which is what I like to see. Well written, good characterisation...no ace characterisation. I like the way it's not a happy ending like most, unique and awesome work!
10/10 Jessiy...x
8JessiyI liked this story. I feel it also gave me an insight into you which is what I like to see. Well written, good characterisation...no ace characterisation. I like the way it's not a happy ending like most, unique and awesome work!
10/10 Jessiy...x
5/22/2009 c1 2Weedkiller Biscuit
oh... this was so sad. when it began i thought it would be just another cliched break up story, but i think this was really quite remarkable. um... i think occasionally you slip into comfortable turns of phrase, or images, but other then that, this was really brilliant. keep up the good work
2Weedkiller Biscuitoh... this was so sad. when it began i thought it would be just another cliched break up story, but i think this was really quite remarkable. um... i think occasionally you slip into comfortable turns of phrase, or images, but other then that, this was really brilliant. keep up the good work
10/16/2008 c1 Jusmine
Wow...That was absolutely brilliant, O Great One! *grin* Personally, I think "O Brilliant One" works better, but whatever...
I was hoping for a happy ending the whole time...and you made it sad! But I still loved it. :D
Brilliant. Wonderful. Perfect. Incredible. Etc., etc.. :D
Wow...That was absolutely brilliant, O Great One! *grin* Personally, I think "O Brilliant One" works better, but whatever...
I was hoping for a happy ending the whole time...and you made it sad! But I still loved it. :D
Brilliant. Wonderful. Perfect. Incredible. Etc., etc.. :D
7/29/2008 c1 Lee Jung
No matter how many times I go back to read this story, it never fails to have me close to tears and wishing for more.
No matter how many times I go back to read this story, it never fails to have me close to tears and wishing for more.