for Hero1/26/2009 c3 Capriccio
i liked the bigbird putin. funny how todd says
"Don't come running to me when Big Bird starts chasing you one day",
i love your individual characters you created. all different and interesting. i definately want more
update soon !
i liked the bigbird putin. funny how todd says
"Don't come running to me when Big Bird starts chasing you one day",
i love your individual characters you created. all different and interesting. i definately want more
update soon !
1/26/2009 c3 cutiedeb
hey hey hey!
look who updated?
haha
nice chapter
tone down the swearing yea? she sounds like a sailor on deck!
i love todd!
update soon!
xox
hey hey hey!
look who updated?
haha
nice chapter
tone down the swearing yea? she sounds like a sailor on deck!
i love todd!
update soon!
xox
1/25/2009 c2 Zenia
Update!
Update!
1/8/2009 c2 randomnoise
The fastest you've updated a chapter? I know you've rewritten everything, but it's been a YEAR since you published this story. And its your ONLY story!
Althoug, I do love this story. I can totally relate to Riley's reaction there. I would have done the same thing.
The fastest you've updated a chapter? I know you've rewritten everything, but it's been a YEAR since you published this story. And its your ONLY story!
Althoug, I do love this story. I can totally relate to Riley's reaction there. I would have done the same thing.
1/8/2009 c2 Laughter in Air
Hahahah. Shocker. Wow. Poor Riley. Is Jayden a name or both boys and girls? Yes, obviously; I just never heard it for a guy before.
I kinda prefer Todd for Riley than Jayden...
Hahahah. Shocker. Wow. Poor Riley. Is Jayden a name or both boys and girls? Yes, obviously; I just never heard it for a guy before.
I kinda prefer Todd for Riley than Jayden...
12/12/2008 c1 
5Wedgiee
YO! stinkface =]
you finally updated!
its a really good chapter :]
I really like Todd =P
sorry it took so long to review i explain later;)
WOW i've use a ton of smileys
Love youu
Wedgie.
p.s update soon
5WedgieeYO! stinkface =]
you finally updated!
its a really good chapter :]
I really like Todd =P
sorry it took so long to review i explain later;)
WOW i've use a ton of smileys
Love youu
Wedgie.
p.s update soon
12/11/2008 c2 loriaG
i luk jared and jayden, i actually really luk your lastest chapter'' i can't wait for the rest, don't leave it hanging for too long ~
i luk jared and jayden, i actually really luk your lastest chapter'' i can't wait for the rest, don't leave it hanging for too long ~
12/11/2008 c2 rebekkkka
He’s status sat on the point of the pyramid
it should be his status
gosh G even I can spell
hahahahaha
im loving this though!
love you too
xx
He’s status sat on the point of the pyramid
it should be his status
gosh G even I can spell
hahahahaha
im loving this though!
love you too
xx
12/11/2008 c2 3bumblee bee
hey short stuff
its a really good chap thank you for actually writing add me on msn my name (b...uk
3bumblee beehey short stuff
its a really good chap thank you for actually writing add me on msn my name (b...uk
12/11/2008 c2 Capriccio
what can i say
i love where this story is heading so far.
i'll be looking forward to this character jayden :)
what can i say
i love where this story is heading so far.
i'll be looking forward to this character jayden :)
11/14/2008 c1 5Hana Koneko
1. "blue chair. of hers."
2. "Ignoring the response Dr. Milan"
3. "pissed the shit of me."
1-I don't think you intended that first period to be there
2-There should be a comma after 'response'
3-I think you want 'out' to be typed after 'shit'
Those are some things i saw. But otherwise i really liked this chapter. I hope the second chap is posted soon.
P.S thanks for reviewing my story. =3
5Hana Koneko1. "blue chair. of hers."
2. "Ignoring the response Dr. Milan"
3. "pissed the shit of me."
1-I don't think you intended that first period to be there
2-There should be a comma after 'response'
3-I think you want 'out' to be typed after 'shit'
Those are some things i saw. But otherwise i really liked this chapter. I hope the second chap is posted soon.
P.S thanks for reviewing my story. =3