for She Knew the Taste of Vindiction11/3/2007 c1 FrankCastleCM09
Short but sweet. I really loved this. As an avid horror and gore lover, its nice to see someone who writes it so well. You do a fantastic job with the descriptions. You don't overdescribe anything but at the same time leave enough so that its paints a clear picture of what is happening and describes the gore effect excellantly. It's dark and horrible, and that's why I like it. Love the final line as well. Good Work :)
Short but sweet. I really loved this. As an avid horror and gore lover, its nice to see someone who writes it so well. You do a fantastic job with the descriptions. You don't overdescribe anything but at the same time leave enough so that its paints a clear picture of what is happening and describes the gore effect excellantly. It's dark and horrible, and that's why I like it. Love the final line as well. Good Work :)