for Play Ball1/28/2020 c5 Smile
I really liked the bickering , I liked the story,
I recently start reading your stories but I wanted to know if you are still planning to write or you left the writing?
Thanks for sharing your stories,
:-)
My : shinelilac3 at Gmail dot com
I really liked the bickering , I liked the story,
I recently start reading your stories but I wanted to know if you are still planning to write or you left the writing?
Thanks for sharing your stories,
:-)
My : shinelilac3 at Gmail dot com
9/2/2012 c5 Monica
I really hope you go somewhere with this
I really hope you go somewhere with this
6/20/2012 c5 
6Ditto123
Oh, this story is getting so good! I was just wondering when you're planning to update it. It's absolutely amazing. And we're barely on the fourth chapter!
6Ditto123Oh, this story is getting so good! I was just wondering when you're planning to update it. It's absolutely amazing. And we're barely on the fourth chapter!
5/10/2012 c5 Monica
Are you ever going to update this? :o
Are you ever going to update this? :o
1/4/2012 c1 Nobody in particular
Prologue was a little sketchy. Sort of reminded me of the movie 'she's the man' but it's only an intro so im going to read some more.
Prologue was a little sketchy. Sort of reminded me of the movie 'she's the man' but it's only an intro so im going to read some more.
12/31/2011 c5 2HelgaBertoni
Yay, you finally updated! Loved it of course and I can't wait till you update again!Glad your back!:)
2HelgaBertoniYay, you finally updated! Loved it of course and I can't wait till you update again!Glad your back!:)
12/29/2009 c3 CoHOCD
Ha! I've never heard it described like that before! "Cheshire cat grin..." Me likey!
Ha! I've never heard it described like that before! "Cheshire cat grin..." Me likey!
10/17/2009 c3 neverliveindoubt
This story is ending up more and more fun than I could say- I didn't review that last two chapters because- eh- college is sucking every little bit of time I have. Though I see a lot of potential with this story I cannot wait to see how you take it.
This story is ending up more and more fun than I could say- I didn't review that last two chapters because- eh- college is sucking every little bit of time I have. Though I see a lot of potential with this story I cannot wait to see how you take it.