
10/19/2008 c2 Green Eyed Angel
Wow, that was just so good. Firstly, I love the idea. Secondly, I love happy endings. Well-plotted and funny.
Wow, that was just so good. Firstly, I love the idea. Secondly, I love happy endings. Well-plotted and funny.
10/8/2008 c2
3cutepanda
This is really good!
You are really good at writing.
Please continue if you can! Pwease?
The story is really good so it wold go to waste if you didn't continue it~!
Very good job!
C

This is really good!
You are really good at writing.
Please continue if you can! Pwease?
The story is really good so it wold go to waste if you didn't continue it~!
Very good job!
C
10/3/2008 c2
43NationChild
Aw...no names? lol I like the story better that way anyway. Makes the reader focus more on the actual characters and their actions. I liked the whole writing-on-the-desk thing; very imaginitive (sp?).

Aw...no names? lol I like the story better that way anyway. Makes the reader focus more on the actual characters and their actions. I liked the whole writing-on-the-desk thing; very imaginitive (sp?).
10/2/2008 c2 Fallen Star Angel
:D
This is such a cutsy little story, I LOVE IT!
OMG, Mr. Hall suspended them! What is gonna happen then? Hehe, it will be good though!
Make sure to add another chapter soon! I want to know their names, see how cute they are together.
Hopefully something romantic like that happens to me in my high school life. :D
- Smiling Star Angel
:D
This is such a cutsy little story, I LOVE IT!
OMG, Mr. Hall suspended them! What is gonna happen then? Hehe, it will be good though!
Make sure to add another chapter soon! I want to know their names, see how cute they are together.
Hopefully something romantic like that happens to me in my high school life. :D
- Smiling Star Angel
9/15/2008 c2
1Alora The Sleepy
I love it. Seriously. That was so cute. And I had this brilliant image of him dancing in my head. It was hilarious and all throughout the story, I kept flashing back to it. Ahaha. I'm like pissing myself right now. And the thing with the 'basketball'. Absolute hilarity. Personally, I like oneshot two better than oneshot one. But that's cool. =D Lucky for him though that she was pretty. Lol.
Anyway, thanks for this little bit of fun. Now I gotta go do homework. I have procrastinating issues. Lol.
Later.

I love it. Seriously. That was so cute. And I had this brilliant image of him dancing in my head. It was hilarious and all throughout the story, I kept flashing back to it. Ahaha. I'm like pissing myself right now. And the thing with the 'basketball'. Absolute hilarity. Personally, I like oneshot two better than oneshot one. But that's cool. =D Lucky for him though that she was pretty. Lol.
Anyway, thanks for this little bit of fun. Now I gotta go do homework. I have procrastinating issues. Lol.
Later.
8/31/2008 c2
19toffeecakesxox
Aw this is a cute follow-up! I don't know why I never saw it. Shame on my eyes. Just. Shame! Anyways, love it! So adorable! Now I get to imagine what their names are! Muahahaha!
Strawberry xx

Aw this is a cute follow-up! I don't know why I never saw it. Shame on my eyes. Just. Shame! Anyways, love it! So adorable! Now I get to imagine what their names are! Muahahaha!
Strawberry xx
8/31/2008 c2 Stalin's Wenis Guard
adorable.
BTW- love the times pi thing. I cracked up good 'ol 3.131592...
adorable.
BTW- love the times pi thing. I cracked up good 'ol 3.131592...
8/29/2008 c2
10Electric Rose
Loved it!
So cute :)
I think it was a good thing, that we never know their names, it was a good ending :D
Hehehe. So Adorable :)

Loved it!
So cute :)
I think it was a good thing, that we never know their names, it was a good ending :D
Hehehe. So Adorable :)
8/26/2008 c1
19toffeecakesxox
Aww! This was adorable! I love it! It's so UNIQUE! WONDERFUL! :D
Strawberry xx

Aww! This was adorable! I love it! It's so UNIQUE! WONDERFUL! :D
Strawberry xx