7/7/2008 c1 23english summer rain
love this. it's been a while since you wrote this, but i think it's one of your best.

11/8/2007 c1 ikisstotell
this is simply amazing, y r u sick of writing it!

so i pretty much luv that line 'he doesn't really think of her. except when he does'

...hm...i'm trying to think of criticism...the only part that i was lyk wat? at was: 'the skirt barely reaches her wrist' i was lyk how does that work and then figured it out

this whole thing flows really well that was the only part that broke it up for me so yea...

much luv

sarahh

11/4/2007 c1 233kelsi bones
I've fallen deeply in love with your writing. You're an amazing writer, talented beyond belief. This piece held so much emotion, even being so short.

*adds to favorite author list/favorite story list*

k.X