for Those Stupid Butterflies3/11/2008 c5 Ambriel
It's OK if you're slow to update... that's what Story Alert lists are for! Stalking! No more hitting refresh every 10 seconds in hope of an update! Now we can just sit back and... hit refresh every 10 seconds of our email inbox! ...at least there are more chances of emails if we're mass stalking fics and authors. ;)
Zen makes me feel like buying lots of bright pink clothes. I always go like 'I should go check for clothes on eBay' when I'm done reading your description of his outfits. XD;;
I have this feeling this is either going to end in a bloodbath with lots of little pieces of Zen everywhere or... with sex.
It's OK if you're slow to update... that's what Story Alert lists are for! Stalking! No more hitting refresh every 10 seconds in hope of an update! Now we can just sit back and... hit refresh every 10 seconds of our email inbox! ...at least there are more chances of emails if we're mass stalking fics and authors. ;)
Zen makes me feel like buying lots of bright pink clothes. I always go like 'I should go check for clothes on eBay' when I'm done reading your description of his outfits. XD;;
I have this feeling this is either going to end in a bloodbath with lots of little pieces of Zen everywhere or... with sex.
3/10/2008 c5 
17Cattails
Ah, Zen. He amuses me so much (especially his wild rambles). That drama on the bus sounds traumatizing! Especially with it ending up on YouTube... Ah, Ethan will give in eventually! XD
17CattailsAh, Zen. He amuses me so much (especially his wild rambles). That drama on the bus sounds traumatizing! Especially with it ending up on YouTube... Ah, Ethan will give in eventually! XD
3/10/2008 c5 3Choice
I loved this, as usual! :)
Great job with Zen, and I love the Youtube thing at the end. xD Poor Ethan (Albert).
Can't wait for more!
-Choice.
3ChoiceI loved this, as usual! :)
Great job with Zen, and I love the Youtube thing at the end. xD Poor Ethan (Albert).
Can't wait for more!
-Choice.
3/10/2008 c5 14demented cookies
oh my god, during the bus scene i couldn't help but feel sorry for ethan. to tell you the truth, zen kind of reminds me of my sister. only my sister is only 7 and doesn't even know what a soulmate is yet.
14demented cookiesoh my god, during the bus scene i couldn't help but feel sorry for ethan. to tell you the truth, zen kind of reminds me of my sister. only my sister is only 7 and doesn't even know what a soulmate is yet.
3/10/2008 c5 Pixie Shtick
I have to say I really hate Zen. If your plan is to make him likable I'm sorry to disappoint you. He is funny though. Very entertaining story. I think you're extremely clever.
I have to say I really hate Zen. If your plan is to make him likable I'm sorry to disappoint you. He is funny though. Very entertaining story. I think you're extremely clever.
3/10/2008 c5 3Tobyk947
Aw...it's getting so cute! I love it. I love you to bits and pieces, so there. I beat you. OHMIGOD! but not really, i promise, only in pretend! But if you dont mind *wink wink* LMAO. sorry. i'm in a weird mood. BWAH HA HA HA HA HA HA AH AHA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA AH AH HA HA HA HA *coff coff* *drags self away*
3Tobyk947Aw...it's getting so cute! I love it. I love you to bits and pieces, so there. I beat you. OHMIGOD! but not really, i promise, only in pretend! But if you dont mind *wink wink* LMAO. sorry. i'm in a weird mood. BWAH HA HA HA HA HA HA AH AHA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA AH AH HA HA HA HA *coff coff* *drags self away*
3/3/2008 c4 3nuclearXsquid
Aww! adorable! There's no critisism i can give, because it rocks! Who!
Write more soon!
3nuclearXsquidAww! adorable! There's no critisism i can give, because it rocks! Who!
Write more soon!
3/3/2008 c1 Firewish
heh, Zen is a boy after my own heart, I go on rants like that all the time. Yesterday it was about flying gerbils. Anyway I really enjoy this story so far and am hoping you plan to continue it. The ramblings are so funny! I love how Ethan is in such denial, he and Zen were meant to be. _
heh, Zen is a boy after my own heart, I go on rants like that all the time. Yesterday it was about flying gerbils. Anyway I really enjoy this story so far and am hoping you plan to continue it. The ramblings are so funny! I love how Ethan is in such denial, he and Zen were meant to be. _
3/2/2008 c4 1samalane
Ethan IS melting.
XD
this story is adorable. Zen is so ..happy. I think I'd die if I met someone like that. but in a good way, cheeriness is ...um ...i forget the word, but it's hard NOT to be affected. Maybe?
But Etahn is adorable. So cruel. How old is HE, by the way?
Can't wait for the next chapter!
1samalaneEthan IS melting.
XD
this story is adorable. Zen is so ..happy. I think I'd die if I met someone like that. but in a good way, cheeriness is ...um ...i forget the word, but it's hard NOT to be affected. Maybe?
But Etahn is adorable. So cruel. How old is HE, by the way?
Can't wait for the next chapter!
3/2/2008 c4 15Bluorange
UPDATE DAMMIT! This was amazing. I'm in love with Zen because he's so personable! *nods head*
You have a talent for making people cute.
15BluorangeUPDATE DAMMIT! This was amazing. I'm in love with Zen because he's so personable! *nods head*
You have a talent for making people cute.
3/1/2008 c3 Bluorange
OMGOMGOMGOMG!
I love this chapter so much, it's so amazing! So I was texting my friend while I was reading this and I forced her to lsiten to something you wrote and the really big paragraphs you have Ethan say, you know what I mean? And she laughed really hard, whcih got us talking even more about how much we love you! And I lover the color orange so mcuh, and I loved the way you described it! And I love Ethan and how cute and evil he is and he's like some sadist who I'm sure is going to rape poor little Zen some day, but he might get raped instead since Zen is a little pervert who simply acts like a child just so he can seduce Ethan, but now it isn't working so he's using his super cool cooking techniques instead and hoping he can win Ethan's heart even though time is running out! And he's simply annoys Ethan so his image will be burned into Ethan's mind for all eternity! I love Evanescence too, especially I Must Be Dreaming! It's so amazing!
OMGOMGOMGOMG!
I love this chapter so much, it's so amazing! So I was texting my friend while I was reading this and I forced her to lsiten to something you wrote and the really big paragraphs you have Ethan say, you know what I mean? And she laughed really hard, whcih got us talking even more about how much we love you! And I lover the color orange so mcuh, and I loved the way you described it! And I love Ethan and how cute and evil he is and he's like some sadist who I'm sure is going to rape poor little Zen some day, but he might get raped instead since Zen is a little pervert who simply acts like a child just so he can seduce Ethan, but now it isn't working so he's using his super cool cooking techniques instead and hoping he can win Ethan's heart even though time is running out! And he's simply annoys Ethan so his image will be burned into Ethan's mind for all eternity! I love Evanescence too, especially I Must Be Dreaming! It's so amazing!
3/1/2008 c2 Bluorange
Don't feed me to ZEN! I'm scared!
But this chapter was hilarious! You need to update soon, unless it's only four chapters long. You have LONG paragraphs though! You need to space them out because they're hard to read when they're THAT long! Holy christ!
Don't feed me to ZEN! I'm scared!
But this chapter was hilarious! You need to update soon, unless it's only four chapters long. You have LONG paragraphs though! You need to space them out because they're hard to read when they're THAT long! Holy christ!