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12/5/2007 c1 65Nemonus
Good. Watch for typos. This poem is good at showing how you feel and draw confidance from the proverb. Good rhythm.

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12/2/2007 c1 3Fan Fan
Thoughtful ending there...could definitely be interpreted in different ways that could provoke some interesting debate :) Good job with the lingering dip of a sizzling ending, lovely work
11/7/2007 c1 Needa S
Wisdom brings us victory. Beautifully done. Write on and God Bless you.
11/5/2007 c1 1Rainy Rose
I like it. Proverbs is the "wisdom book" I love the Bible and the verse that you picked out.
11/5/2007 c1 332smile for the sunshine
That is a nice interpretation of it. The verse is definitely soothing yet it foreshadows coming trouble. It just provides hope through it. Good work. Keep writing. = )

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