for My Salvation12/17/2007 c1 
2sunsetLover
oh my that was pretty heavy for me to carry...lol..anyways, you really did a good job although the story was pretty tragic..i would have wanted it to end like a hopeful one..but what you wrote was a reality...good luck!...hoping that you still have hope in you...
2sunsetLoveroh my that was pretty heavy for me to carry...lol..anyways, you really did a good job although the story was pretty tragic..i would have wanted it to end like a hopeful one..but what you wrote was a reality...good luck!...hoping that you still have hope in you...
11/5/2007 c1 1Aruru
...That was beautiful. I'm about to cry again. Curse emotions and their pestering presence. That was wonderfully written, the plotline was greatly woven, and the emotions were so strongly tied into it. I saw so many things in my mind's eye, and those alone could make a beautifully sad movie. I adore you for writing something this touching.
- Self-Diagnosed ADD
1Aruru...That was beautiful. I'm about to cry again. Curse emotions and their pestering presence. That was wonderfully written, the plotline was greatly woven, and the emotions were so strongly tied into it. I saw so many things in my mind's eye, and those alone could make a beautifully sad movie. I adore you for writing something this touching.
- Self-Diagnosed ADD