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11/16/2007 c1 612simpleplan13
that last line is such a powerful simile... and the simile about his voice is awesome also.. great piece
11/9/2007 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Yow. That's quite some . . . graphic imagery. I like it, though. That last line is quite striking and leaves the reader taken aback. Nice. I also like the idea that someone's voice could SOUND like crusted over blood. Very intriguing. Love it. Keep writing! :)
11/7/2007 c1 4windy girl
The whole thing is awesome. I didn't expect the last line and the mental image scared me a bit. Haha. Good job.

-pb
11/6/2007 c1 34Smoky Bear
speaks volumes in it's brevity.

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