for The Scream of Horror1/19/2008 c1 adanael
riley, do some of us a favor and contiue the f*ing story
riley, do some of us a favor and contiue the f*ing story
11/28/2007 c1 Northwesst
Ouch! that girl sure does like her freedom. I thought your story was good. It was really well written, You should consider doing more with this story, it would turn out really great!
Ouch! that girl sure does like her freedom. I thought your story was good. It was really well written, You should consider doing more with this story, it would turn out really great!
11/24/2007 c1 
11Speak For the Noise
loll this is definitely different. but it's very creative, which is a good thing =] now that you're older, maybe you should edit this and see if it can be continued.
good luck writing =]
11Speak For the Noiseloll this is definitely different. but it's very creative, which is a good thing =] now that you're older, maybe you should edit this and see if it can be continued.
good luck writing =]
11/6/2007 c1 2a girl named Charlotte
Well I have to admit, the plot was a just a little cliche.
But, I'm sure that now that you're older (I assume) you're writing will improve! Keep going!
2a girl named CharlotteWell I have to admit, the plot was a just a little cliche.
But, I'm sure that now that you're older (I assume) you're writing will improve! Keep going!