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1Blueway360
Wow. Just wow.
That was so great! I am definitely going to check out any other stories that you have, considering that your writing is better than most people's!
1Blueway360Wow. Just wow.
That was so great! I am definitely going to check out any other stories that you have, considering that your writing is better than most people's!
1/3/2013 c32 4Gothic-innocence16
This story is amazing. I love it. I'm do glad that everything turned out for the best. XD
4Gothic-innocence16This story is amazing. I love it. I'm do glad that everything turned out for the best. XD
10/27/2012 c32 AnonymousReads
Why is it that in all of your stories someone is getting abused physically and talked down to but isn't smart enough to trust when a guy is good. Great story. :)
Why is it that in all of your stories someone is getting abused physically and talked down to but isn't smart enough to trust when a guy is good. Great story. :)
6/17/2012 c32 Living-With-Remembrance
This story is freaking amazing. The struggles Alair and Joseph made it through are amazing. At times I had to pause in reading so I wouldn't cry because I became so emotionally attached to Alair. Her struggles are familiar and horrible and I'd wish them upon no one. Though there were moments when I wanted to smack Joseph upside the head and yell at him, he was overall a very likable character as well a great hero.
This story is freaking amazing. The struggles Alair and Joseph made it through are amazing. At times I had to pause in reading so I wouldn't cry because I became so emotionally attached to Alair. Her struggles are familiar and horrible and I'd wish them upon no one. Though there were moments when I wanted to smack Joseph upside the head and yell at him, he was overall a very likable character as well a great hero.
10/27/2011 c9 1Wanderingreader
Reading the first chapters in this stories is just fine. 2 comments: You have issues writing the emotions of the characters and, your transition from one scene to another needs some support (words).
I like the plot but it bothers me that the characters have some inconsistencies especially on this scene/chapter.
I will continue reading and hopefully, I can leave another review for your story.
Good luck.
1WanderingreaderReading the first chapters in this stories is just fine. 2 comments: You have issues writing the emotions of the characters and, your transition from one scene to another needs some support (words).
I like the plot but it bothers me that the characters have some inconsistencies especially on this scene/chapter.
I will continue reading and hopefully, I can leave another review for your story.
Good luck.
2/10/2010 c32 sneaky-fox
I can't belive I haven't read this story before now, it's fantastic! I love the characters and they really evolve througtout the story.
You rock!
I can't belive I haven't read this story before now, it's fantastic! I love the characters and they really evolve througtout the story.
You rock!
6/15/2009 c4 3Letterdown
Hah I can't get enough of this Jett boy ;D. He's such a cutie! His personality is just addicting and I keep laughing at his quirkiness.
Nikki is just insane o.o what a nutjob! I'd flip shit if someone pulled a stunt like that on me! (Not that it's possible, since I'm the chick hah)
I like how it's got a very dark undertone, but with all of the dialogue, you're keeping the mood light for the most part. Nice :)
-continues reading-
3LetterdownHah I can't get enough of this Jett boy ;D. He's such a cutie! His personality is just addicting and I keep laughing at his quirkiness.
Nikki is just insane o.o what a nutjob! I'd flip shit if someone pulled a stunt like that on me! (Not that it's possible, since I'm the chick hah)
I like how it's got a very dark undertone, but with all of the dialogue, you're keeping the mood light for the most part. Nice :)
-continues reading-
5/16/2009 c32 HalfKimchiHalfCarne
Aw cute&swet(:
A couple of times I was furious at jett, but what can a man do? Lol
Great story
Aw cute&swet(:
A couple of times I was furious at jett, but what can a man do? Lol
Great story
1/17/2009 c32 1Tigery
I really loved the ending! (the epilogue, not the one where Alaira gets covered in brains after shooting Mitchell (though I did love the action)).
It was an awesomely good story, and I really loved all the action (but Mitchell made me angry a lot).
Keep Writing!
Hugglez & Toodlez
~ Tigery ^_^
1TigeryI really loved the ending! (the epilogue, not the one where Alaira gets covered in brains after shooting Mitchell (though I did love the action)).
It was an awesomely good story, and I really loved all the action (but Mitchell made me angry a lot).
Keep Writing!
Hugglez & Toodlez
~ Tigery ^_^