
10/26/2011 c1
8Dark Blue Lover
Wow, great work on this. Short and unique. Love the image it brings to mind :)
Thanks for uploading!

Wow, great work on this. Short and unique. Love the image it brings to mind :)
Thanks for uploading!
8/29/2010 c1
19Eternal Skies
There's something nice about this haiku
It makes me think of summer and it's boring, uneventful days

There's something nice about this haiku
It makes me think of summer and it's boring, uneventful days
10/9/2009 c1
59Alien Emerald
This has to be one of my alltime favorite haiku's... I could picture the scene from the very first line.

This has to be one of my alltime favorite haiku's... I could picture the scene from the very first line.
8/14/2009 c1 CCPerson
xD It's hilarious, in my opinion XD
xD It's hilarious, in my opinion XD
9/1/2008 c1
24ilovetheopera
jesus christ, utilised like this, haiku is a bloody art form and no mistake.
why haven't you written since May? good god.

jesus christ, utilised like this, haiku is a bloody art form and no mistake.
why haven't you written since May? good god.
2/26/2008 c1
1FromMyBackyard
asphalt is lovely to lay upon...the rough texture, the warmth from the heating of the sun.
i'd want to evaporate too, though, just to enjoy the sensation.

asphalt is lovely to lay upon...the rough texture, the warmth from the heating of the sun.
i'd want to evaporate too, though, just to enjoy the sensation.
1/5/2008 c1
5Kaleidoscope23
I love this. Excellent word choice, they fit so nice together. It's short but powerful.

I love this. Excellent word choice, they fit so nice together. It's short but powerful.