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6/10/2013 c1 anqiaj
At first, I got a bunch of wierd mental images. And now I can't stop laughing XD
10/26/2011 c1 8Dark Blue Lover
Wow, great work on this. Short and unique. Love the image it brings to mind :)

Thanks for uploading!
8/29/2010 c1 19Eternal Skies
There's something nice about this haiku

It makes me think of summer and it's boring, uneventful days
2/10/2010 c1 167nickyO
2/5/2010 c1 36Kate Marshall
Humorous. It's comical, but refreshingly creative!
10/9/2009 c1 59Alien Emerald
This has to be one of my alltime favorite haiku's... I could picture the scene from the very first line.
8/15/2009 c1 1tonight we bloom
11 words and 31 reviews.

This is really stunning.
8/14/2009 c1 CCPerson
xD It's hilarious, in my opinion XD
9/1/2008 c1 24ilovetheopera
jesus christ, utilised like this, haiku is a bloody art form and no mistake.

why haven't you written since May? good god.
8/14/2008 c1 4Anesther
Depressing and very original.

Wonderful haiku. ;)
8/13/2008 c1 70PoetryQueen
It was really different. I liked it!
3/3/2008 c1 8Written
2/26/2008 c1 1FromMyBackyard
asphalt is lovely to lay upon...the rough texture, the warmth from the heating of the sun.

i'd want to evaporate too, though, just to enjoy the sensation.
1/5/2008 c1 5Kaleidoscope23
I love this. Excellent word choice, they fit so nice together. It's short but powerful.
1/5/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
awesome word choice and the imagery of her evaporating is amazing
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