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11/10/2007 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
This is just great. I love how strange some of these lines seem, but how true they are - "he's over six feet tall and feels that way," for one; how can you feel a certain height? You can, though. Interesting. I loved "like our bones belonged to each other's bodies." Such a fantastic line. Really fascinating piece. Keep writing! :)
11/8/2007 c1 612simpleplan13
interesting las line.. I love the middle stanza... him being six feet but feeling he's smaller is great

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