for Tongue Tied11/6/2010 c3 Jee
-is sad this story has not been continued since 2007-
-is sad this story has not been continued since 2007-
8/4/2010 c3 happy-ending-lover
what what WHAT! OMG!
It ends here? It seriously cannot end here *cries*
Is there any hope for an update?
I'm too captivated in the story to accept not knowing what happens!
Please tell me there is hope!
what what WHAT! OMG!
It ends here? It seriously cannot end here *cries*
Is there any hope for an update?
I'm too captivated in the story to accept not knowing what happens!
Please tell me there is hope!
2/25/2010 c3 MidnightLunar
I love the way you write, I like both stories although Erik can be a bit of an ass:P
I love the way you write, I like both stories although Erik can be a bit of an ass:P
12/29/2009 c3 123
you are a good writer, I just don't like your main character, he's too weak and soft with no backbone. for god sake he's a tenn he should act like it, be rebelious angre because of whats happening with his family and should stand up for himself against his friend's acusations. friends are supposed to support you, get you in trouble or just don't give a damn not act like your mom. I see it often authors trying to create the sound of reason through this fagghags which annoys me. making them seem all fun and cool which in reality is not always the case. why a gay guy cannot have a friend guy who he's not trying to jump? I hate sounding like some asshole but I just thought you would like an honest opinion. other then this i really like your style it clean and fun to read
you are a good writer, I just don't like your main character, he's too weak and soft with no backbone. for god sake he's a tenn he should act like it, be rebelious angre because of whats happening with his family and should stand up for himself against his friend's acusations. friends are supposed to support you, get you in trouble or just don't give a damn not act like your mom. I see it often authors trying to create the sound of reason through this fagghags which annoys me. making them seem all fun and cool which in reality is not always the case. why a gay guy cannot have a friend guy who he's not trying to jump? I hate sounding like some asshole but I just thought you would like an honest opinion. other then this i really like your style it clean and fun to read
10/24/2009 c3 
2alwaysfaith
Aw. I love the detention group. They feel like they belong together in some sort of weird way. I kind of like Rusty but she seems out of place, and the whole side drama with the family makes it interesting the whole time instead of just at school.
Your writing flows very nicely, and I can't wait to read more!
2alwaysfaithAw. I love the detention group. They feel like they belong together in some sort of weird way. I kind of like Rusty but she seems out of place, and the whole side drama with the family makes it interesting the whole time instead of just at school.
Your writing flows very nicely, and I can't wait to read more!
6/13/2008 c3 audrii
...update, please?
i think you have so much more to write...
...update, please?
i think you have so much more to write...
3/22/2008 c3 1Airily
:O you write well.
real plot real characters humour = love. hope you update soon.
1Airily:O you write well.
real plot real characters humour = love. hope you update soon.
11/24/2007 c3 5paputsza
omg awesomeness. i should get an online life. : but this story's really cute, i like it so much. smooches.
5paputszaomg awesomeness. i should get an online life. : but this story's really cute, i like it so much. smooches.
11/23/2007 c1 paputsza
hehe this is sad. And for a while the lead was reminding me of this guy i know. creepy as hell, looks a bit like bert off of sesame street. he's not asain, just yellow with a rectangular face. : had an odd infatuation with a friend of mind. sane girl, a little slow, but sane. he was a bit obsessed though, her best friend for a while, when she broke up with her boyfriend, and her first, he asked her out like the next day and she immediately said no, cuz his face is weird looking and all. He wouldn't give up and just kind of cornered her in between his legs in her desk on a daily basis. Now /I/ feel like protecting her, but she's a purple belt with pepper spray, so she'll live. But even though she's a flirt, it gets to her after a while. Once she was acting like a total b*ch and after our little spat(silent treatment) i found out she was in a bad mood from some guy(butt-ugly)humping her while on the soccer field. poor little irish girl :
hehe this is sad. And for a while the lead was reminding me of this guy i know. creepy as hell, looks a bit like bert off of sesame street. he's not asain, just yellow with a rectangular face. : had an odd infatuation with a friend of mind. sane girl, a little slow, but sane. he was a bit obsessed though, her best friend for a while, when she broke up with her boyfriend, and her first, he asked her out like the next day and she immediately said no, cuz his face is weird looking and all. He wouldn't give up and just kind of cornered her in between his legs in her desk on a daily basis. Now /I/ feel like protecting her, but she's a purple belt with pepper spray, so she'll live. But even though she's a flirt, it gets to her after a while. Once she was acting like a total b*ch and after our little spat(silent treatment) i found out she was in a bad mood from some guy(butt-ugly)humping her while on the soccer field. poor little irish girl :
11/20/2007 c3 I Enjoy Cotton Socks
lol, it's good. keep up the great work. only one thing that is buggint me right now...
"Leave it go." you mixed up leave it alone, and let it go... so yeah.. lol
lol, it's good. keep up the great work. only one thing that is buggint me right now...
"Leave it go." you mixed up leave it alone, and let it go... so yeah.. lol
11/20/2007 c3 6Wizard of Souls
This story is like watching a fight: you know you shouldn't get caught up but you can't help but find out what's going on. I really enjoy the story so far, but I can't say if I like any character besides Sabrina. I'm curious about her and Will the most, honestly.
~WoS
6Wizard of SoulsThis story is like watching a fight: you know you shouldn't get caught up but you can't help but find out what's going on. I really enjoy the story so far, but I can't say if I like any character besides Sabrina. I'm curious about her and Will the most, honestly.
~WoS