for Was I A Fool?11/16/2008 c1 
74Grains and Oats
This is fantastic...It makes one recall their own first love, or even first crush and what happened if/when they were rejected...Great descriptions, awesome rhyming scheme, epic poem overall. Sweet and innocent, yet heart wrenching. I love it.
74Grains and OatsThis is fantastic...It makes one recall their own first love, or even first crush and what happened if/when they were rejected...Great descriptions, awesome rhyming scheme, epic poem overall. Sweet and innocent, yet heart wrenching. I love it.
11/9/2007 c1 155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
This is really the closest poem I've had from my own first love. This was written very very well, I enjoyed it very much. The first four lines (stanza I'd like to say) was perfect and pulled me in. Although it seemed to have it's share of melancolly sadness, it was truly a great piece of work. Good work, keep it up.
155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.XThis is really the closest poem I've had from my own first love. This was written very very well, I enjoyed it very much. The first four lines (stanza I'd like to say) was perfect and pulled me in. Although it seemed to have it's share of melancolly sadness, it was truly a great piece of work. Good work, keep it up.