
7/25/2011 c1
9XXXAdeleXXX
Wow really liked it. I was immersed in the scenario for a few minutes whilst I read it. Puts me in a very philosophical mood. Was very! well written. WOW is all I can say.

Wow really liked it. I was immersed in the scenario for a few minutes whilst I read it. Puts me in a very philosophical mood. Was very! well written. WOW is all I can say.
6/19/2009 c1 Cynion
oh woman what you do to me.
the utter descriptiveness made me cringe. i could almost see myself at the dirty roadside, with its rainbow gasoline (liked that!) and all its glory.
and i loved the twist. didn't see it coming at all.
excellent job.
x
oh woman what you do to me.
the utter descriptiveness made me cringe. i could almost see myself at the dirty roadside, with its rainbow gasoline (liked that!) and all its glory.
and i loved the twist. didn't see it coming at all.
excellent job.
x
9/11/2008 c1 sunflower.kiss
Really good ending. I love those type of stories that make you think one thing, but at the end it's totally different. :)
Really good ending. I love those type of stories that make you think one thing, but at the end it's totally different. :)
12/4/2007 c1
65Stella Grimshaw
Soo intense. This was a great twist, and I loved the subject matter. You never read stuff like this anymore, it's always refreshing to find something like this. High fives for a great one shot.

Soo intense. This was a great twist, and I loved the subject matter. You never read stuff like this anymore, it's always refreshing to find something like this. High fives for a great one shot.
11/17/2007 c1 jamiehamster
Very interesting, i love the twist!
Very interesting, i love the twist!
11/17/2007 c1 Andrew
Wow, I haven't anything lyk this. Terrific job!
Wow, I haven't anything lyk this. Terrific job!
11/14/2007 c1 emmawatsonlove
Wow, loved the twist at the end. This story felt very nice and deep and unexpected. Very original. Good job!
Wow, loved the twist at the end. This story felt very nice and deep and unexpected. Very original. Good job!
11/11/2007 c1
1Kuro Hane
I liked it, very well written and kept me interested the whole way through :) Sorta melancholy but thats the way I like them anyways, not to mention, makes it realistic. Keep it up. :D

I liked it, very well written and kept me interested the whole way through :) Sorta melancholy but thats the way I like them anyways, not to mention, makes it realistic. Keep it up. :D
11/11/2007 c1 Crystalina
wow i'm speachless. this is a very good story!
wow i'm speachless. this is a very good story!
11/11/2007 c1 jklong
This was just beautiful. Well done.
This was just beautiful. Well done.
11/10/2007 c1 unknown
wow this is very beautifully written
wow this is very beautifully written
11/10/2007 c1
12FoolofaTook17
i loved this. it seemed so real, and the way you portrayed Sherri and Henry was awesome. Henry seems so adorable! i really liked the twist at the end, with Sherri being an undercover police officer. great job! =)

i loved this. it seemed so real, and the way you portrayed Sherri and Henry was awesome. Henry seems so adorable! i really liked the twist at the end, with Sherri being an undercover police officer. great job! =)
11/10/2007 c1
21wecouldgoandget40s
This was interesting and different than all the other stories I'm used to seeing on this site. Great work with this. Thumbs up to you.

This was interesting and different than all the other stories I'm used to seeing on this site. Great work with this. Thumbs up to you.