for Sneaking Suspicion10/10/2012 c1 Dave C
Well written, good twists throughout. Good thing she wasn't the quick to act type or he could've ended up with some bullet holes - which would have ruined the moment..
Well written, good twists throughout. Good thing she wasn't the quick to act type or he could've ended up with some bullet holes - which would have ruined the moment..
2/24/2008 c1 
2mia5081
So incredibly sweet. I actually thought he was cheating on her as well...and then I, er, hoped she beat him up 0.0 lol
Good job!
~Mia
2mia5081So incredibly sweet. I actually thought he was cheating on her as well...and then I, er, hoped she beat him up 0.0 lol
Good job!
~Mia
12/15/2007 c1 Thracian
Haha, awesome job at setting this up. I expected the worst for the main character. I really didn't see the ending coming, the guy just sounded like the biggest prick in the beginning, nice characterization. I can see why people like this.
Haha, awesome job at setting this up. I expected the worst for the main character. I really didn't see the ending coming, the guy just sounded like the biggest prick in the beginning, nice characterization. I can see why people like this.
12/8/2007 c1 22Goodnight Nickname
How does 300 hits feel? I still think that this is incredibly clever and it doesn't surprise me at all that this made the list with some of the best C2's. You are amazingly talented and I hope that I grow as a writer to be just as good as you. I think I inherited it. XD
22Goodnight NicknameHow does 300 hits feel? I still think that this is incredibly clever and it doesn't surprise me at all that this made the list with some of the best C2's. You are amazingly talented and I hope that I grow as a writer to be just as good as you. I think I inherited it. XD
11/11/2007 c1 8find-a-new-way
great job!that really came from the heart. chapter after chaper, you are getting better!
8find-a-new-waygreat job!that really came from the heart. chapter after chaper, you are getting better!
11/10/2007 c1 2artistic dreamer
wow...that is so sweet! he seems so perfect, i'm such a hopeless romantic. i'm getting a few tears in my eyes...
but you did a really REALLY good job, fell for it, i really though he was cheating on her, and i didn't even realize it until like the last few sentences GREAT JOB! i love this one shot!
2artistic dreamerwow...that is so sweet! he seems so perfect, i'm such a hopeless romantic. i'm getting a few tears in my eyes...
but you did a really REALLY good job, fell for it, i really though he was cheating on her, and i didn't even realize it until like the last few sentences GREAT JOB! i love this one shot!
11/10/2007 c1 6unfortunately freckled
Oh my, this was really really good. I actually knew that something was up because there seemed to be some comedic timing, and I had a sneaking suspicion (ha-ha) that he was going to give her a surprise party XD
I'm glad you wrote this. You might just have a flair for romance stories after all, haha!
` unfortunately freckled
6unfortunately freckledOh my, this was really really good. I actually knew that something was up because there seemed to be some comedic timing, and I had a sneaking suspicion (ha-ha) that he was going to give her a surprise party XD
I'm glad you wrote this. You might just have a flair for romance stories after all, haha!
` unfortunately freckled
11/10/2007 c1 3beeyouteefull
I was convinced that he was cheating on her! Really good twilst at the end!
3beeyouteefullI was convinced that he was cheating on her! Really good twilst at the end!