for Save the Cheerleader4/5/2017 c1 Toffeema
Cute.
Cute.
8/1/2015 c1 Guest
This was... cute.
I feel like Gavin would kill me for saying that!
I enjoyed this story a ton and the fact that it was written in the guy's perspective is refreshing and definitely a plus point from me as it rarely ever is the case with one shots here.
All in all good work!
This was... cute.
I feel like Gavin would kill me for saying that!
I enjoyed this story a ton and the fact that it was written in the guy's perspective is refreshing and definitely a plus point from me as it rarely ever is the case with one shots here.
All in all good work!
8/31/2014 c1 Julietish
Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on the site, a judge wrote this review for it: If you're a sucker for a total hate/love cliche, then look no further. I don't think it really gets more cliche than this one.
It's about Gavin, who is your typical bad boy, and his neighbor Katie, who is your typical good girl. Gavin thinks that Katie is too nice-she puts way too much faith in people then let them walk all over her. When they first met, she was way too cheerful and and happy and innocent. You could say it was hate at first sight. After Gavin made sure to belittle her and just generally act like a jerk, Katie stopped acting like an angel to him and returned his animosity full force. Now, three years later, nothing has changed. At least, not until Halloween.
Save the Cheerleader was a very cute read. It basically solidified the whole "opposites attract" theory. I don't know if I can say the characters were altogether realistic; lillypad-hopper seemed to have really leaned back on the stereotypical, cliche bad boy and good girl. Regardless, it was very well-written. There were a lot of run-on sentences, but instead of being distracting and off-putting, it added to the almost dramatic feel of the story. It also gave good insight into Gavin's head, considering it was in his point-of-view. It's a comparatively short read, so if you find yourself with ten minutes and nothing to do, I definitely recommend Save the Cheerleader.
Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on the site, a judge wrote this review for it: If you're a sucker for a total hate/love cliche, then look no further. I don't think it really gets more cliche than this one.
It's about Gavin, who is your typical bad boy, and his neighbor Katie, who is your typical good girl. Gavin thinks that Katie is too nice-she puts way too much faith in people then let them walk all over her. When they first met, she was way too cheerful and and happy and innocent. You could say it was hate at first sight. After Gavin made sure to belittle her and just generally act like a jerk, Katie stopped acting like an angel to him and returned his animosity full force. Now, three years later, nothing has changed. At least, not until Halloween.
Save the Cheerleader was a very cute read. It basically solidified the whole "opposites attract" theory. I don't know if I can say the characters were altogether realistic; lillypad-hopper seemed to have really leaned back on the stereotypical, cliche bad boy and good girl. Regardless, it was very well-written. There were a lot of run-on sentences, but instead of being distracting and off-putting, it added to the almost dramatic feel of the story. It also gave good insight into Gavin's head, considering it was in his point-of-view. It's a comparatively short read, so if you find yourself with ten minutes and nothing to do, I definitely recommend Save the Cheerleader.
5/24/2014 c1 
5Ishotthealbatross
This is literally one of the best oneshots on this website! It's in my fav. top five, definitely! I can't count how many times I've re-read this :-)
5IshotthealbatrossThis is literally one of the best oneshots on this website! It's in my fav. top five, definitely! I can't count how many times I've re-read this :-)
1/11/2014 c1 Jess
I really love this story! I just cant stop reading it! I think this is the 20th time Im reading it, its just hilarious! Best oneshot on fp :-)
I really love this story! I just cant stop reading it! I think this is the 20th time Im reading it, its just hilarious! Best oneshot on fp :-)
11/21/2013 c1 while-it-rains
I liked it :). It was sweet, and the characters lovely. Nice work.
I liked it :). It was sweet, and the characters lovely. Nice work.
8/1/2013 c1 Guest
Wow, just wow.
This is fucking amazing, to be honest.
Wow.
Wow, just wow.
This is fucking amazing, to be honest.
Wow.
6/11/2013 c1 1leavesfallingup
Denial is often fun to read about. The poor guy is toast, even if he isn't quite prepared to admit it yet. Then again, from the sound of things, he doesn't seem too broken up about it either. Thanks, I enjoyed this story.
1leavesfallingupDenial is often fun to read about. The poor guy is toast, even if he isn't quite prepared to admit it yet. Then again, from the sound of things, he doesn't seem too broken up about it either. Thanks, I enjoyed this story.
9/28/2012 c1 heal me forever
damn dis is fricking awesum ha\he is super awesum nd she is damn brave ;)
damn dis is fricking awesum ha\he is super awesum nd she is damn brave ;)