7/28/2012 c1 13youngin-matomon
This made me smile. It's very unrealistic and real at the same time and it was just so stupidly CUTE that I couldn't stop smiling the entire time. Gavin is really stupid. The girl might be even worse. But oh my god, are they the damndest cutest thing ever!
This made me smile. It's very unrealistic and real at the same time and it was just so stupidly CUTE that I couldn't stop smiling the entire time. Gavin is really stupid. The girl might be even worse. But oh my god, are they the damndest cutest thing ever!
5/28/2012 c1 Littlemslulu
The story is cute and sweet. I wish it was a little bit more elaborated, but the again the short-ness of this story somehow is the charm itself. It feels good and entertaining to read from guy's point of view sometimes.
The story is cute and sweet. I wish it was a little bit more elaborated, but the again the short-ness of this story somehow is the charm itself. It feels good and entertaining to read from guy's point of view sometimes.
7/26/2011 c1 6LaughsWithTears
Yay! His name is Gavin! I LOVE that name! :) Great story, by the way! :)
Yay! His name is Gavin! I LOVE that name! :) Great story, by the way! :)
5/5/2011 c1 Brown-Eyed Chocoholic
This made me laugh.
Can't say I adore Katie since I find her quite weird. x) But she's pretty funny. And so's Gavin. The two make me giggle.
There were some mistakes, but I think this is a nice one-shot. :)
This made me laugh.
Can't say I adore Katie since I find her quite weird. x) But she's pretty funny. And so's Gavin. The two make me giggle.
There were some mistakes, but I think this is a nice one-shot. :)
3/27/2011 c1 t
this was so cute that I literally hugged my squishy crocodile soft toy as I read it. yep, THAT cute.
so, well done! love gavin, makes me laugh :)
this was so cute that I literally hugged my squishy crocodile soft toy as I read it. yep, THAT cute.
so, well done! love gavin, makes me laugh :)
1/13/2011 c1 TeddyBearHugs
HAHAHAHA! I was laughing my ass off the whole time! Hilarious and amazing story. My favorite part was :
"What, um, what was that for?" My voice is almost hopeful and I nearly curse randomly just to earn back some man-points.
Haha! Man-points? Nice :D
HAHAHAHA! I was laughing my ass off the whole time! Hilarious and amazing story. My favorite part was :
"What, um, what was that for?" My voice is almost hopeful and I nearly curse randomly just to earn back some man-points.
Haha! Man-points? Nice :D