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8/27/2008 c9 knits alot
I really like this story. It has so many possibilities. And I don't understand your author's note... I think you are doing a good job at portraying Lan-na. He seems a little mysterious, but that's because the story is from Kay's point of view.
8/26/2008 c9 70TheBeautyOfTheGrave
O.o This is great. Please update soon...you have to! I want to know what happens, awesome story so far. Good job ^^

God Bless You

~Holli x
8/26/2008 c9 5kazoua
This is a really good chapter. Um, thanks for acknowledging my review, no one ever does that sort of thing anymore. It's real nice. But back on the story, I think this chapter changes some things. I wouldn't have thought Lan-na would be so easy to change his sexuality. Or maybe it isn't even his sexuality? Maybe he's just accepting Kay's affection? But to tell his mother? That's just something I wouldn't expect out of any Asian kid. All the gay Asian kids I know usually just let their parents find out gradually. The old generation is pretty homophobic. But then again, Mrs. Li seems like a nice lady. It may go okay.
8/21/2008 c8 1LilwenKeitha
Ooh poor Lan-na. I hope he gets better quickly.
8/21/2008 c8 5kazoua
Dun really know what to say. I love lan-na, I really do, but sometimes I just raise my eyebrow when it comes to him. I mean, seriously? Just give it up, man. But it's your story, you probably have all the good stuff planned out and waiting to emerge.
8/11/2008 c7 Angelhacker
That was hilarious. He really wants to come out if he subconsciously says that at the perfect time. XD
8/11/2008 c7 1LilwenKeitha
More, I want more!
8/11/2008 c7 12kcn
Well, I am really enjoying this story and can't wait to see how it turns out!
8/11/2008 c1 kcn
HOLY CRAP! I love all things jrock, especially Gackt Miyavi and Hyde. I actually have never really listened to Dir-en-grey, because I haven't gotten the chance, but that's next on my list of things-to-do... Have you heard X Japan? Read up about Hide and Yoshiki, and then listen to Tears. It made me cry the first time I heard it. Sorry if I'm coming off as overbearing, but I have an extreme obsession... 8D I'm liking the story so far, I'm off to read the rest...!
8/8/2008 c6 infinite silence
i love rhis story [:
7/30/2008 c6 crystal balle
This is such a sweet story. I love the characters, even though I really haven't seen much of them. I hope that Lan-na and Kay end up together.
7/30/2008 c6 1LilwenKeitha
I really enjoy this story. It's hard to find one like it, because of how realistic it is. Keep up the awesome work please!
7/29/2008 c6 Angelhacker
I think I've fallen in love this this story. XD
7/26/2008 c1 cobraqueen17
First Dir En Grey is awsome but I prefer Kyo. Second yummy Gackt video. Third poor poor boy.
7/25/2008 c4 5kazoua
Ahh man... that's horrible. Not the story, just what happened. But oh well, the more drama the better the story.
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