for Innocent without Complications6/25/2008 c3 nonday
this sounds interesting. the characters are unique in their way , and i like how everything happens as it should in an awkward teenagers' relationship.
i would very much like to hear the rest of it.
this sounds interesting. the characters are unique in their way , and i like how everything happens as it should in an awkward teenagers' relationship.
i would very much like to hear the rest of it.
5/24/2008 c3 Aero
Very good story. I like the way this is staring off. ^^
And I agree with Esquirella. Unique approach indeed. We don't see too much of that anymore.
I have one thing to say though:
“No way, I got a date with Barbie Friday.” Ken announced proudly.
XD Great pun, right there. did'ja run out of naming ideas?
Can't wait for chapter 4!
Very good story. I like the way this is staring off. ^^
And I agree with Esquirella. Unique approach indeed. We don't see too much of that anymore.
I have one thing to say though:
“No way, I got a date with Barbie Friday.” Ken announced proudly.
XD Great pun, right there. did'ja run out of naming ideas?
Can't wait for chapter 4!
11/24/2007 c2 Orangeena
I like this a lot so far, it's really cute. I'm glad Lan-na didn't end up cutting off contact completely, but I am seriously wondering about him. I'm guessing that his culture and his emotions are conflicting (not that I have an extensive education in Chinese culture). I just think he is insecure within himself, and doesn't know how to handle outward homosexuality. Hopefully he will come into his own, or at least lend his support to Kay during his journey. Can't wait for more!
I like this a lot so far, it's really cute. I'm glad Lan-na didn't end up cutting off contact completely, but I am seriously wondering about him. I'm guessing that his culture and his emotions are conflicting (not that I have an extensive education in Chinese culture). I just think he is insecure within himself, and doesn't know how to handle outward homosexuality. Hopefully he will come into his own, or at least lend his support to Kay during his journey. Can't wait for more!
11/16/2007 c2 Jamie
This is pretty good so far. I'm really liking the characters. Can't wait to read what happens next :)
This is pretty good so far. I'm really liking the characters. Can't wait to read what happens next :)
11/16/2007 c2 
25Esquirella
Usually it's the other way around and the non-jock is struggling with his feelings. Very unique approach. I like it.
25EsquirellaUsually it's the other way around and the non-jock is struggling with his feelings. Very unique approach. I like it.