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7/17/2008 c3 2Friday Night
You. Need. To. Update. D:
6/25/2008 c3 nonday
this sounds interesting. the characters are unique in their way , and i like how everything happens as it should in an awkward teenagers' relationship.

i would very much like to hear the rest of it.
5/24/2008 c3 Aero
Very good story. I like the way this is staring off. ^^

And I agree with Esquirella. Unique approach indeed. We don't see too much of that anymore.

I have one thing to say though:

“No way, I got a date with Barbie Friday.” Ken announced proudly.

XD Great pun, right there. did'ja run out of naming ideas?

Can't wait for chapter 4!
11/24/2007 c2 Orangeena
I like this a lot so far, it's really cute. I'm glad Lan-na didn't end up cutting off contact completely, but I am seriously wondering about him. I'm guessing that his culture and his emotions are conflicting (not that I have an extensive education in Chinese culture). I just think he is insecure within himself, and doesn't know how to handle outward homosexuality. Hopefully he will come into his own, or at least lend his support to Kay during his journey. Can't wait for more!
11/16/2007 c2 3portabellaprincess
11/16/2007 c2 Jamie
This is pretty good so far. I'm really liking the characters. Can't wait to read what happens next :)
11/16/2007 c2 21D. Jimmy
Lan-na is acting too calm. Maybe he block the kiss off.
11/16/2007 c2 25Esquirella
Usually it's the other way around and the non-jock is struggling with his feelings. Very unique approach. I like it.
11/12/2007 c1 Esquirella
Wow! Hell of a great start! What will Lan-na do now that he knows?
11/12/2007 c1 21D. Jimmy
pretty good. I cried at the end. cant wait for the next chapter!
11/12/2007 c1 3portabellaprincess
Looks good. Can't wait to see what happens!
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