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11/19/2007 c1 poncypuck
This is a very nice piece. I think it leaves just enough to the imagination and achieves a great contrast between the simple memories and the intricate descriptions of the narrator. The only thing I can say is that there are a few (slightly) awkward word choices here and there. Otherwise, I really enjoyed this. Nice work!

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