for I Remember12/3/2007 c1 bipedalcooney
Really wonderfully written. I love the nostalgia you've captured in this poem. Very beautiful, both in words and in concept.
Really wonderfully written. I love the nostalgia you've captured in this poem. Very beautiful, both in words and in concept.
11/12/2007 c1 
10Susannah Simon
oh i like it! very inspirational. and so true! you really covered every aspect of getting older. except for losing memories... but then the piece wouldn't be titled "i remember"... i'm babbling. punctuation would be nice :D or something before the next "i remember". without it, it was a little hard to read at the beginning. but i got the hang of it by the end. this piece has distinct tone too. very nice!
10Susannah Simonoh i like it! very inspirational. and so true! you really covered every aspect of getting older. except for losing memories... but then the piece wouldn't be titled "i remember"... i'm babbling. punctuation would be nice :D or something before the next "i remember". without it, it was a little hard to read at the beginning. but i got the hang of it by the end. this piece has distinct tone too. very nice!