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11/19/2007 c1 26Michael Kim
A death in your arms is my life complete.

That would've been cool too :)

anyway, i like your build-up and style (and diction)

but i have to say the repetition does get redundant

sometimes, less is more (that's a cliche, i know, i know)

but seriously, good work

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