for Lonely Without You12/24/2012 c12 SinCos
Omg! Love it! I love you way had ari in disbelief and though ari still has feelings for micheal, micheal has to work for his relationship. I enjoy the type of slow-ish burn you have going between the two characters. Sometimes some authors make it too rushed and it doesn't flow right but I really like how you are approaching this :) good work! Update soon!
Omg! Love it! I love you way had ari in disbelief and though ari still has feelings for micheal, micheal has to work for his relationship. I enjoy the type of slow-ish burn you have going between the two characters. Sometimes some authors make it too rushed and it doesn't flow right but I really like how you are approaching this :) good work! Update soon!
7/16/2012 c12 Guest
This was a great story. I loved the setting, the narrative, the characters. I would love to see where the relationship between Ari and Michael would go from that point on. Even though I noticed that this story was dropped I couldn't stop reading it. Ahhh, it was worth it.
This was a great story. I loved the setting, the narrative, the characters. I would love to see where the relationship between Ari and Michael would go from that point on. Even though I noticed that this story was dropped I couldn't stop reading it. Ahhh, it was worth it.
12/30/2010 c12 12eafggdsg
Love the story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! :)
Love the story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! :)
12/3/2010 c12 VioletNight97
omg this is an awesome story! i love the plot and the characters! please please please update! xDD
omg this is an awesome story! i love the plot and the characters! please please please update! xDD
9/25/2010 c11 xoxlizzie
Man, another excellent chapter! Brain seems pretty cool. But I can't wait to see michael again! Update very quickly, I am excited to see what will happen.
Man, another excellent chapter! Brain seems pretty cool. But I can't wait to see michael again! Update very quickly, I am excited to see what will happen.
9/23/2010 c11 ricemidget
aww poor ari, he's in for a real adventrue XD loving it!
btw, if no one else had mentioned... you had a typo half way
"
"And I bet you miss Michael something terrible after all this time." Andy said.
"Not quite how I would put it." I laughed miserably. -typo-Michael
aww poor ari, he's in for a real adventrue XD loving it!
btw, if no one else had mentioned... you had a typo half way
"
"And I bet you miss Michael something terrible after all this time." Andy said.
"Not quite how I would put it." I laughed miserably. -typo-Michael
9/23/2010 c11 
2toinfinity
Great chapter :)
..Maybe Ari will believe Michael now, not be so angry with him? (Crosses fingers ;D)
Anyway, thanks for the update!
2toinfinityGreat chapter :)
..Maybe Ari will believe Michael now, not be so angry with him? (Crosses fingers ;D)
Anyway, thanks for the update!
9/17/2010 c10 25ConfigurationSpace
Excellent story thus far - the character interaction is great! I'm really intrigued by what you've written so far, and I can't wait for the next update!
25ConfigurationSpaceExcellent story thus far - the character interaction is great! I'm really intrigued by what you've written so far, and I can't wait for the next update!