
11/20/2007 c1
116loversdream17
GREAT JOB! I really liked how you kept the flow and rythm going. GREat piece.
Mandi~4~life

GREAT JOB! I really liked how you kept the flow and rythm going. GREat piece.
Mandi~4~life
11/14/2007 c1
10Lavender Quill
This was very well written! I really liked the last 6 lines. Good job!

This was very well written! I really liked the last 6 lines. Good job!