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5/31/2009 c1 Icyfire4w5
I love the angsty feel throughout this story.
1/14/2008 c1 Elevator Passenger
Short and angsty. It's usually hard to find a good one, but yours does the trick. I like how you use some of the same structures and words/phrases to stablish the pattern in the narrator's life. Also, Teddy Geiger is too cute, but way underrated. Nice work.
1/5/2008 c1 nat van os
you're a great writer! I feel angsty now. =]
12/11/2007 c1 sweden
the only bad thing is that it could have been longer :( i was quite sad when I reached the end, but still good nonetheless. i can relate to her. i don't think i'm completely hopeless though
12/9/2007 c1 1EndlessSummer
I really enjoyed this story. You created a strong emotional impact with few words. Good job!
12/7/2007 c1 10funsize
omg.. a feeling of hopelessness has kinda overcome me.. dammit.. only the good ones get to me like this.. and i have to say urs is one of them

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