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10/10/2017 c7 Guest
Wicked! Is there another chapter for this story?
Wicked! Is there another chapter for this story?
7/13/2017 c4
6Ditto123
Wow, one of the few times I decide not to read the comments before the story, and there's a creepy reddit backstory attached to it.

Wow, one of the few times I decide not to read the comments before the story, and there's a creepy reddit backstory attached to it.
7/12/2017 c5 Ditto123
I was pleasantly surprised to find out how much of a backbone Rosella has. Lord Aldolan had done something unforgivable towards her (sure, it was his demon wolf acting on primal instinct and being impatient to have her, but it's still a part of him), and she stood her ground in wanting to be away from him. I've read so many stories where the girl gives in a way too easily a little too fast, and I kept expecting that to happen, but it didn't!
It's so nice and refreshing to read. Rosella has no sympathy toward Aldolan's actions, despite wanting to comfort him during their last conversation, but that could just be the workings of being marked by him to be his mate. That sort of thing doesn't seem genuine to me-not unless they fell in love prior to that.
I'm certain that Aldolan will still receive his happy ending (he does seem to be the main male character), so I'm wondering how that'll happen. Will Rosella continue living in our dimension for the rest of her life? If she does, my best guess is that she would die, reincarnate (if that's a possibility in your story), and somehow meet Aldolan. Or she'll somehow be reunited w/ Aldolan who will spend a lot of time trying to atone for his actions.
I'm really happy at how nice the King and Queen seem to be. Especially the queen since she didn't seem biased towards her son, pardoning what he did and putting the blame on Rosella. Based on what I've read so far about them, they seem like reasonable, sensible characters.
Anyways, keep up the good work! Hope to see more chapters updated in the future!
I was pleasantly surprised to find out how much of a backbone Rosella has. Lord Aldolan had done something unforgivable towards her (sure, it was his demon wolf acting on primal instinct and being impatient to have her, but it's still a part of him), and she stood her ground in wanting to be away from him. I've read so many stories where the girl gives in a way too easily a little too fast, and I kept expecting that to happen, but it didn't!
It's so nice and refreshing to read. Rosella has no sympathy toward Aldolan's actions, despite wanting to comfort him during their last conversation, but that could just be the workings of being marked by him to be his mate. That sort of thing doesn't seem genuine to me-not unless they fell in love prior to that.
I'm certain that Aldolan will still receive his happy ending (he does seem to be the main male character), so I'm wondering how that'll happen. Will Rosella continue living in our dimension for the rest of her life? If she does, my best guess is that she would die, reincarnate (if that's a possibility in your story), and somehow meet Aldolan. Or she'll somehow be reunited w/ Aldolan who will spend a lot of time trying to atone for his actions.
I'm really happy at how nice the King and Queen seem to be. Especially the queen since she didn't seem biased towards her son, pardoning what he did and putting the blame on Rosella. Based on what I've read so far about them, they seem like reasonable, sensible characters.
Anyways, keep up the good work! Hope to see more chapters updated in the future!
3/15/2013 c11
3AriTakahashi
OMG! This is so touching! You did a wonderful job with this story, cant wait to read more.

OMG! This is so touching! You did a wonderful job with this story, cant wait to read more.
1/1/2013 c21
4R. Ficst
Well, it could use quite a bit of tidying and editing, but overall I really enjoyed your story. I wish the continuation were posted here; what with everything involving the mystery around Michael, I feel like your work would do better as one larger novel, rather than being broken up where it is. Anyways, good work, and thanks for posting : )

Well, it could use quite a bit of tidying and editing, but overall I really enjoyed your story. I wish the continuation were posted here; what with everything involving the mystery around Michael, I feel like your work would do better as one larger novel, rather than being broken up where it is. Anyways, good work, and thanks for posting : )
7/28/2012 c7 CrimsonsNight
i thinks its realistic...well as realistic as possible all things considered.
i thinks its realistic...well as realistic as possible all things considered.
7/28/2012 c6 CrimsonsNight
rose seems a liitle sadistic when she was talking about him controlling his inner wolf...
rose seems a liitle sadistic when she was talking about him controlling his inner wolf...