for Wolf Demons of the Northern Lands1/7/2008 c11 
2GreekB
Aw. I like the butterfly bit, how his son was there. Aw. It was such an "Aw" chapter. It rocked. XD
P.S - I like your 'claimer'
lol
2GreekBAw. I like the butterfly bit, how his son was there. Aw. It was such an "Aw" chapter. It rocked. XD
P.S - I like your 'claimer'
lol
1/7/2008 c11 1The Wolfdemon of fire
it may have been mushy but it was still an awesome chapter.Update soon and please let her change her mind about going back to that human dude.Those two need eachother.
1The Wolfdemon of fireit may have been mushy but it was still an awesome chapter.Update soon and please let her change her mind about going back to that human dude.Those two need eachother.
1/6/2008 c1 XxLana93xX
wow this story sounds and looks really well keep up the work love you nii-sams!
wow this story sounds and looks really well keep up the work love you nii-sams!
1/6/2008 c11 sousie
that was absolutely great just the emotion needed to make the story more amazing
i hope you will update soon
that was absolutely great just the emotion needed to make the story more amazing
i hope you will update soon
1/6/2008 c11 5InOcEnT-schoolgirl
aw... that was so sweet! I ALMOST CRIED! i ALMOST got watery eyes- AND that is saying something for me =D lol
that was a good chapter- AND I LOVED THE LAST LINE lol
nah i didn't think it was cheesy- well... till you pointed it out... lol- because it flowed with a non cheesy moment i didn't at all seem cheesy
besides i love cheesy ^_^
update soon
5InOcEnT-schoolgirlaw... that was so sweet! I ALMOST CRIED! i ALMOST got watery eyes- AND that is saying something for me =D lol
that was a good chapter- AND I LOVED THE LAST LINE lol
nah i didn't think it was cheesy- well... till you pointed it out... lol- because it flowed with a non cheesy moment i didn't at all seem cheesy
besides i love cheesy ^_^
update soon
1/5/2008 c11 1Katherine-the-greate
nice chapter, albiet shorter than usual. Please post more soon :)
one thing to look at:
-Rose had listened to every he just said and
1Katherine-the-greatenice chapter, albiet shorter than usual. Please post more soon :)
one thing to look at:
-Rose had listened to every he just said and
1/5/2008 c11 KittyKaiya
That was beautiful, I felt every emotion that Corlin felt. His loss and desire for Rose to stay, his love for her and the pup, all of it was wonderfully expressed.
And I love the last few lines and no I don't think the last one was cheesey - it fit prefectly
Keep up the excellent work, I love it.
That was beautiful, I felt every emotion that Corlin felt. His loss and desire for Rose to stay, his love for her and the pup, all of it was wonderfully expressed.
And I love the last few lines and no I don't think the last one was cheesey - it fit prefectly
Keep up the excellent work, I love it.
1/1/2008 c10 1The Wolfdemon of fire
let Rose fall for corlin soon please.Or have the other guy cheat on her or tell her to stay with corlin or something.
1The Wolfdemon of firelet Rose fall for corlin soon please.Or have the other guy cheat on her or tell her to stay with corlin or something.
1/1/2008 c10 KittyKaiya
This was an excellent chapter - I loved it. I wonder what Rose was telling Falcor. The title of this chapter is good, don't ever change it.
This was an excellent chapter - I loved it. I wonder what Rose was telling Falcor. The title of this chapter is good, don't ever change it.
12/31/2007 c10 5InOcEnT-schoolgirl
aw... poor lil guy... well all of them really... =(
poor falcor... poor corlin... and poor rose... I thought she sent the body over for Corlin to see..? obviously not if he didn't know about it... maybe i imagined you saying that
lol
wouldn't be the first time =P
meh- it kinda takes alot for me to cry... BUT i actually did onece with a rather sentimental ending to a story on fanfiction... aw... oh well technically i have twice because the other time i was crying... but not for the same reasons =P i was laughing so hard i was crying hehe
but yeah they were both at the end of the stories on fanfiction =D
I LOVE FANFICTION ^_^
hehe
update soon
5InOcEnT-schoolgirlaw... poor lil guy... well all of them really... =(
poor falcor... poor corlin... and poor rose... I thought she sent the body over for Corlin to see..? obviously not if he didn't know about it... maybe i imagined you saying that
lol
wouldn't be the first time =P
meh- it kinda takes alot for me to cry... BUT i actually did onece with a rather sentimental ending to a story on fanfiction... aw... oh well technically i have twice because the other time i was crying... but not for the same reasons =P i was laughing so hard i was crying hehe
but yeah they were both at the end of the stories on fanfiction =D
I LOVE FANFICTION ^_^
hehe
update soon