for Wolf Demons of the Northern Lands7/28/2012 c4 CrimsonsNight
i wonder what the message is going to be? really think this story is beautiful.
i wonder what the message is going to be? really think this story is beautiful.
3/21/2012 c2 miquest
The young ones of wolves are called pups. Cubs are the young of big cats like lion, tigers etc.,.
The young ones of wolves are called pups. Cubs are the young of big cats like lion, tigers etc.,.
1/14/2012 c15 kecc
Not sure about this chapter...its a bit mushy and the characters repeat themselves...over and over...
Not sure about this chapter...its a bit mushy and the characters repeat themselves...over and over...
1/14/2012 c4 kecc
OkI like the wolf/demon dialogue!
and I like the chapter but...
Michael...he was asking all these questions about the father of Falcor-there were too many questions and he was so emotional about the father being at the birth- this was just not believable-men dont act like that (I'm assuming he is a human male right?). I like the idea of Michael being in there but these emotional questions should be with a girlfriend or even the elderly couple- not the new boyfriend...otherwise Michael shouldnt be a love interest he would better fit in the friend category.
OkI like the wolf/demon dialogue!
and I like the chapter but...
Michael...he was asking all these questions about the father of Falcor-there were too many questions and he was so emotional about the father being at the birth- this was just not believable-men dont act like that (I'm assuming he is a human male right?). I like the idea of Michael being in there but these emotional questions should be with a girlfriend or even the elderly couple- not the new boyfriend...otherwise Michael shouldnt be a love interest he would better fit in the friend category.
8/3/2011 c2 
3LunaRain
I like this story. I wonder what Colin would do next, though I think it is his fault that Rose refuses to be with him. Imagine him saying things like killing a child that is half-breed, never have a Human as a companion. I say karma's a bitch ha ha ha ha.
For a wolf I think it's pup because they belong to the canine category. The cub belongs to predators like a lion or a tiger and some other I think.
3LunaRainI like this story. I wonder what Colin would do next, though I think it is his fault that Rose refuses to be with him. Imagine him saying things like killing a child that is half-breed, never have a Human as a companion. I say karma's a bitch ha ha ha ha.
For a wolf I think it's pup because they belong to the canine category. The cub belongs to predators like a lion or a tiger and some other I think.
6/30/2011 c8 1Sachi Nehme
This story is pretty good thus far.
I really liked the idea of the wolf mentally biting Corlin. It sounds... painful. Yet funny.
1Sachi NehmeThis story is pretty good thus far.
I really liked the idea of the wolf mentally biting Corlin. It sounds... painful. Yet funny.
6/28/2011 c8 Violet K. Odin
Omg your a dude. Most of the stories guys write suck, but I like yours!3(:
Omg your a dude. Most of the stories guys write suck, but I like yours!3(:
5/12/2011 c1 Other.Side.Of.Sanity
so Thats.IT ? o.O
his choosen his mate...lol
i got a funny feeling that am gonna like this story ..hm love the beginning leaves me wanting more...questions? hm i wonder lol xD
so Thats.IT ? o.O
his choosen his mate...lol
i got a funny feeling that am gonna like this story ..hm love the beginning leaves me wanting more...questions? hm i wonder lol xD