for Surprisingly Unsurprised4/27/2009 c1 Hazelnut Romance
omg. that was so cute and nice family reunion! aunt lucy sounds like a bit**.
omg. that was so cute and nice family reunion! aunt lucy sounds like a bit**.
3/9/2009 c1 
19toffeecakesxox
aw, how adorable! normally, a dude would stand up for his girl's honor, but i love that it's the other way around!
hahaa, these two are the most awkward couple but somehow they just work.
love 'em. :)
-toffeecakesxox.
19toffeecakesxoxaw, how adorable! normally, a dude would stand up for his girl's honor, but i love that it's the other way around!
hahaa, these two are the most awkward couple but somehow they just work.
love 'em. :)
-toffeecakesxox.
7/2/2008 c1 3Venus Smurf1
I was grinning like an absolute moron through this entire thing. It was brilliant and entertaining and funny and fantastically written. You're truly amazing.
3Venus Smurf1I was grinning like an absolute moron through this entire thing. It was brilliant and entertaining and funny and fantastically written. You're truly amazing.
3/17/2008 c1 Northwesst
You really gotta write more stories about katie and gavin! they are just so adorable together! XD
You really gotta write more stories about katie and gavin! they are just so adorable together! XD
2/25/2008 c1 24fairies and snapple
Oh my god, I totally love all four of these! Very sweet and cute, and I love Katie (I empathize so much with her- her personality, I mean), and Gavin's a sweetie. I hope you write more!
24fairies and snappleOh my god, I totally love all four of these! Very sweet and cute, and I love Katie (I empathize so much with her- her personality, I mean), and Gavin's a sweetie. I hope you write more!
12/25/2007 c1 30queen-of-the-sand-castle
aw, that's adorable! gavin is so damn sweet!
i loved the part where katie's, ah, "stuff" spills out. it was quite hilarious.
just a thing: i noticed that in some paragraphs, there are two different people talking in the same paragraph.
He sighs, sounding convincingly downtrodden, and says “That’s my idea of the perfect Thanksgiving, Katie.” “Too bad!” I chirp happily
would be better if it was
He sighs, sounding convincingly downtrodden, and says "That's my idea of a perfect Thanksgiving, Katie."
"Too bad!" I chirp happily.
but other than that, this was cute and hilarious. keep up the awesome work and write more katie/gavin oneshots!
30queen-of-the-sand-castleaw, that's adorable! gavin is so damn sweet!
i loved the part where katie's, ah, "stuff" spills out. it was quite hilarious.
just a thing: i noticed that in some paragraphs, there are two different people talking in the same paragraph.
He sighs, sounding convincingly downtrodden, and says “That’s my idea of the perfect Thanksgiving, Katie.” “Too bad!” I chirp happily
would be better if it was
He sighs, sounding convincingly downtrodden, and says "That's my idea of a perfect Thanksgiving, Katie."
"Too bad!" I chirp happily.
but other than that, this was cute and hilarious. keep up the awesome work and write more katie/gavin oneshots!
11/20/2007 c1 Chels
Aww, how cute~ They are just so frighteningly adorable, huh?
Aww, how cute~ They are just so frighteningly adorable, huh?
11/20/2007 c1 the wicked monkey
I love this to
it absolutly GREAT (i would have said ahmmazing, but I already said that in the other review)
IT so CUTE
but in a totally cool way
and dom't steal Turkey-boy
i copyrighted that
Its the name of a guy in my school
not at all hot
but w/e
he's still tukey-boy
gavin can be chiken boy though
or tuna-boy
... or he he can be the other turkey boy, because im coming up short for good names
ah well not everybody can be genii
- the wicked monkey
I love this to
it absolutly GREAT (i would have said ahmmazing, but I already said that in the other review)
IT so CUTE
but in a totally cool way
and dom't steal Turkey-boy
i copyrighted that
Its the name of a guy in my school
not at all hot
but w/e
he's still tukey-boy
gavin can be chiken boy though
or tuna-boy
... or he he can be the other turkey boy, because im coming up short for good names
ah well not everybody can be genii
- the wicked monkey
11/19/2007 c1 9Lily Llynn
Aw so cute. I love Gavin and Katie, and both POVS are fantastic. (: This was hilarious, too, btw. (:
Once again, super-glad somebody added this to the c2! (:
9Lily LlynnAw so cute. I love Gavin and Katie, and both POVS are fantastic. (: This was hilarious, too, btw. (:
Once again, super-glad somebody added this to the c2! (:
11/18/2007 c1 Noie
Thank you so much for writing a follow-up to Saving the Cheerleader. These characters are so cute and I would love to read more about them. Then it would be Gavin's turn to narrate and I adore listening to him rant; I think it's so funny when the male characters do that, especially when they're written as well as yours are! Please give us another one!
Thank you so much for writing a follow-up to Saving the Cheerleader. These characters are so cute and I would love to read more about them. Then it would be Gavin's turn to narrate and I adore listening to him rant; I think it's so funny when the male characters do that, especially when they're written as well as yours are! Please give us another one!
11/18/2007 c1 31writingxonxwalls
Aw I loved it! So amazing...
Please write more about Gavin and Katie... they're so cute!
''Brie
31writingxonxwallsAw I loved it! So amazing...
Please write more about Gavin and Katie... they're so cute!
''Brie