for Vertigo11/24/2007 c1 
91fairytale failure
I love how this seems to deteriorate from the first stanza, which is so sweet - I like the idea of 'you pressed your smile against mine.' Also, it was great how you connected it to 'I'd wait forever to taste your smile once more' in the last stanza.
91fairytale failureI love how this seems to deteriorate from the first stanza, which is so sweet - I like the idea of 'you pressed your smile against mine.' Also, it was great how you connected it to 'I'd wait forever to taste your smile once more' in the last stanza.
11/20/2007 c1 4windy girl
I adore how this is so cohesive. Not only do you have pretty phrases, they actually make sense. Really good job.
-pb
4windy girlI adore how this is so cohesive. Not only do you have pretty phrases, they actually make sense. Really good job.
-pb
11/20/2007 c1 9Sakina the Fallen Angel
Beautifully simple, yet so emotional, especially the second stanza.
Sakina x
9Sakina the Fallen AngelBeautifully simple, yet so emotional, especially the second stanza.
Sakina x
11/20/2007 c1 19EmeraldsAndPearls33
Oh, I love this! My favorite parts are the entire first stanza and the line "catching fire and praying for rain."
Thanks!
Em
19EmeraldsAndPearls33Oh, I love this! My favorite parts are the entire first stanza and the line "catching fire and praying for rain."
Thanks!
Em