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11/23/2007 c1 3Symphony of Words
I liked the metaphor of comparing love to an umbrella. I thought the line "no music stirs my soul" was very poetic and can I relate to the power of music. Relating the innability of life to move on with a tv being stopped by a remote is a clever comparison. Keep writing! :-)

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