for I Am A Flyer6/17/2010 c49 
2Dachande663-ff
I can't believe that after two years this story is at an end, it's been such an amazing journey. I've loved every minute of this story and can't wait for the next instalment. Thank you for writing this.
2Dachande663-ffI can't believe that after two years this story is at an end, it's been such an amazing journey. I've loved every minute of this story and can't wait for the next instalment. Thank you for writing this.
6/14/2010 c49 1The-Angel-Illusion
Wow now thats not a very happy way to end a story. Good thing there is a sequel! Loved the story loved it loved it loved it!
1The-Angel-IllusionWow now thats not a very happy way to end a story. Good thing there is a sequel! Loved the story loved it loved it loved it!
6/13/2010 c49 11Riley Kathleen
Giant milkshake! YUS! WIN! Just like your story! Total win...well, actually it's rather tragic and sad in a lot of parts and not so much win but still. I HAVE to read the sequel now, so you totally did win. You are a masterful writer. xD Thank you so much for finishing this! Now go write more! D
11Riley KathleenGiant milkshake! YUS! WIN! Just like your story! Total win...well, actually it's rather tragic and sad in a lot of parts and not so much win but still. I HAVE to read the sequel now, so you totally did win. You are a masterful writer. xD Thank you so much for finishing this! Now go write more! D
6/10/2010 c49 xxSTARIFYxx
I think the ending is... erm.. VERY abrupt. Well, it's stil quite a nice story overall, I think. But the ending can seriously be improved. Well, God bless for the next story.
I think the ending is... erm.. VERY abrupt. Well, it's stil quite a nice story overall, I think. But the ending can seriously be improved. Well, God bless for the next story.
6/9/2010 c49 1Nouch Porter
So that's finally over! I absolutely loved it! I really liked the fact that he wanted to be free from all of this, but I have to admit I didn't really see the need of the epilogue. I didn't catch what you wanted him to do after... that.
So, of course, a sequel would be great! :) Otherwise I'll just remember this story without the epilogue; so that I'll have my happy ending :D
1Nouch PorterSo that's finally over! I absolutely loved it! I really liked the fact that he wanted to be free from all of this, but I have to admit I didn't really see the need of the epilogue. I didn't catch what you wanted him to do after... that.
So, of course, a sequel would be great! :) Otherwise I'll just remember this story without the epilogue; so that I'll have my happy ending :D
6/8/2010 c1 lili999
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6/8/2010 c48 18AtlantisGirl12
Yay! Loving the update! :D :D I have to admit...I'm just a tad confused, because there seems to be a gap between the end of the last chapter and the beginning of this one (meaning, Jett seemed hopeful Raven wasn't dead yet, but now he seems sure...must be an ulterior motive, since we know Raven isn't going to die...). Anyway. I love the end, where Jett doesn't really pick a side, but fights for the people. He has definitely grown over the course of this story! I can't believe this is almost over...it's really been great! I love reading your writing (you should definitely consider trying to get published if you haven't already...all your stories about flyers and the Cliff people and such would make great series!). ;) Can't wait to read the epilogue!
18AtlantisGirl12Yay! Loving the update! :D :D I have to admit...I'm just a tad confused, because there seems to be a gap between the end of the last chapter and the beginning of this one (meaning, Jett seemed hopeful Raven wasn't dead yet, but now he seems sure...must be an ulterior motive, since we know Raven isn't going to die...). Anyway. I love the end, where Jett doesn't really pick a side, but fights for the people. He has definitely grown over the course of this story! I can't believe this is almost over...it's really been great! I love reading your writing (you should definitely consider trying to get published if you haven't already...all your stories about flyers and the Cliff people and such would make great series!). ;) Can't wait to read the epilogue!
5/24/2010 c47 The Awesome One
too lazy to log in . . .
this story is terrific! have you ever thought of publishing it when you're done writing it?
too lazy to log in . . .
this story is terrific! have you ever thought of publishing it when you're done writing it?
5/7/2010 c47 1Blitz Attack
... Wow ... Just want to let you know, this story is awesome. I approve. = ) Anyways,
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ZOMGAH THIS IS AMAZING AND I CANT BELIEVE HOW AWESOME IT IS AND I LOVE IT! it's so unique, and I've never read a story that was just so impressive, the characters are amazing, being completely bad@$$ while still being human, and the plot is brilliant. I can't wait to read more!
1Blitz Attack... Wow ... Just want to let you know, this story is awesome. I approve. = ) Anyways,
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ZOMGAH THIS IS AMAZING AND I CANT BELIEVE HOW AWESOME IT IS AND I LOVE IT! it's so unique, and I've never read a story that was just so impressive, the characters are amazing, being completely bad@$$ while still being human, and the plot is brilliant. I can't wait to read more!
5/6/2010 c47 67moongazer7
You... You... cruel... sick...
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*kidding* *takes a deep breath to try to recover from the exciting chapter*
so... it was a great chapter as always. You go, Gal! Bring on the action! this is OUT OF SIGHT! The most marvelous thing I've read.
So, I enjoy the build up of suspense after say, chapter 20 some or 30 some when the other characters were suggesting the two were related. I didn't really think about that before. Though, Ra'Skevvor being his father was totally shocking. I didn't quite make the connection. So, nice suspense, and build up. The beginning of this chaptered killed me. I was just so anxious to see the family reunion, that getting there was painful to read. I enjoyed how you set the sceen up so it's on the wall of the forbidden zone. It really sets up the mood. I enjoyed the whole event in it's whole. It seemed possible and quite exciting. It was tense and it definitely held me in. I was hooked and ready for the ride!
Oh no! Raven's dead. he's dead! I can't believe this!No!Someone help! It was just getting good, and I really came to like him! I sat there shocked and empty! I just can't believe it! He was such a good character and mentor! I really did like him!
I enjoyed how you characterized your characters. I enjoyed Raven's com and collected manner. It seems very appropriate for this meeting. I think it was also good of him to protect jet. He definitely died honorably. It's quite characteristic of Ra'Skevvor to kill off his son. It definitely sounds realistic and matches his character. I think the character of Ra'Skevvor is written well and cleverly. I enjoyed Ra'Skevvor's mannerisms. He appears menacing enough and his character was definitely strong. I enjoyed the comparison between Ra'Skevvor's personality against Jett's. I enjoy the similarities and contrasts.
67moongazer7You... You... cruel... sick...
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*kidding* *takes a deep breath to try to recover from the exciting chapter*
so... it was a great chapter as always. You go, Gal! Bring on the action! this is OUT OF SIGHT! The most marvelous thing I've read.
So, I enjoy the build up of suspense after say, chapter 20 some or 30 some when the other characters were suggesting the two were related. I didn't really think about that before. Though, Ra'Skevvor being his father was totally shocking. I didn't quite make the connection. So, nice suspense, and build up. The beginning of this chaptered killed me. I was just so anxious to see the family reunion, that getting there was painful to read. I enjoyed how you set the sceen up so it's on the wall of the forbidden zone. It really sets up the mood. I enjoyed the whole event in it's whole. It seemed possible and quite exciting. It was tense and it definitely held me in. I was hooked and ready for the ride!
Oh no! Raven's dead. he's dead! I can't believe this!No!Someone help! It was just getting good, and I really came to like him! I sat there shocked and empty! I just can't believe it! He was such a good character and mentor! I really did like him!
I enjoyed how you characterized your characters. I enjoyed Raven's com and collected manner. It seems very appropriate for this meeting. I think it was also good of him to protect jet. He definitely died honorably. It's quite characteristic of Ra'Skevvor to kill off his son. It definitely sounds realistic and matches his character. I think the character of Ra'Skevvor is written well and cleverly. I enjoyed Ra'Skevvor's mannerisms. He appears menacing enough and his character was definitely strong. I enjoyed the comparison between Ra'Skevvor's personality against Jett's. I enjoy the similarities and contrasts.
5/6/2010 c47 18AtlantisGirl12
So...my first reaction was, "NO!" But I have complete faith that Jett will rescue his newly found big brother. :) Or else. (lol)
All joking (sort of) aside, excellent chapter. I can't believe there are only a couple left!
18AtlantisGirl12So...my first reaction was, "NO!" But I have complete faith that Jett will rescue his newly found big brother. :) Or else. (lol)
All joking (sort of) aside, excellent chapter. I can't believe there are only a couple left!