12/26/2009 c17 TymCon
Oh my god:o James:o I dont want to mntion anything in case sdomeone reads review before story but Clay! Well at least marylines happy. Lol the last thing i suspected was Jaqueline:P
Oh my god:o James:o I dont want to mntion anything in case sdomeone reads review before story but Clay! Well at least marylines happy. Lol the last thing i suspected was Jaqueline:P
12/3/2009 c16 SoftlySpokenHeart
Very exciting! O_O ahaha i love all the references you make to movies and such, like when you said the French Maid could've been the "bloody Bates motel." Psycho was a good movie. Well,keep up the good work! i'm hooked!
Very exciting! O_O ahaha i love all the references you make to movies and such, like when you said the French Maid could've been the "bloody Bates motel." Psycho was a good movie. Well,keep up the good work! i'm hooked!
11/24/2009 c2 SoftlySpokenHeart
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA ! ! ! ! o my gosh. . . that sneaky grandma! condom packages! i would die!
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA ! ! ! ! o my gosh. . . that sneaky grandma! condom packages! i would die!
12/25/2008 c14 2Ray-Anne
All these reviews, silly to think you need another one saying how fantastic this is.
All these reviews, silly to think you need another one saying how fantastic this is.
12/23/2008 c13 2MyDiary
omg that was amazing! it's like 1:30 in the morning and i've been glued to this for like an hour. please tell me there's more!
omg that was amazing! it's like 1:30 in the morning and i've been glued to this for like an hour. please tell me there's more!
12/23/2008 c13 3Knowledge is Power
this is a really great story. it is absolutely hilarious. keep writing. find clay and kill james. i always did hate james.
this is a really great story. it is absolutely hilarious. keep writing. find clay and kill james. i always did hate james.
12/22/2008 c13 1Whatever95
(Gasp!) You updated! Wow, I can't believe it.
I don't get why they have to meet James if Marylin is looking for Clayton... but I'm sure you will make it clear. Thanks for updating!
(Gasp!) You updated! Wow, I can't believe it.
I don't get why they have to meet James if Marylin is looking for Clayton... but I'm sure you will make it clear. Thanks for updating!
10/3/2008 c11 1MySweetFears
omg. this is the most bloody hilarious story ever. and clyton is so cuye. i can just imagine him. poor marilyn. she must be so confused. having clayton and then james and on top of all that having to have all the relatives in her house. i dont know how she stands it. shuld be interesting to see how this ahole thing turns out ;) cant wait for the rest of the story!
omg. this is the most bloody hilarious story ever. and clyton is so cuye. i can just imagine him. poor marilyn. she must be so confused. having clayton and then james and on top of all that having to have all the relatives in her house. i dont know how she stands it. shuld be interesting to see how this ahole thing turns out ;) cant wait for the rest of the story!
9/28/2008 c12 1Whatever95
wow this is great. Very orginal. And did I mention I love her sense of humor?;)
wow this is great. Very orginal. And did I mention I love her sense of humor?;)