for Loser12/31/2007 c1 Julius Gillian
Bitter. Not as strong as I'd hoped it would be describing a loner, but it is strong in that it tells us that we all are made of the same stuff, despite are egoism or selfdefeatest beliefs.
Bitter. Not as strong as I'd hoped it would be describing a loner, but it is strong in that it tells us that we all are made of the same stuff, despite are egoism or selfdefeatest beliefs.
11/25/2007 c1 
170MallowsWins
I like this, it flows really well and the message is an original one. I like the phrase 'we all breal the same', it's true and, well, it just sounds awesome. Great haiku.
Peace, Daze
170MallowsWinsI like this, it flows really well and the message is an original one. I like the phrase 'we all breal the same', it's true and, well, it just sounds awesome. Great haiku.
Peace, Daze
11/25/2007 c1 half-sketched.staccatos
konnichi wa
*adds to favs* I love this. It's the most perfect hiaku I've ever read! No extra words (how CAN you when you're limited as much as a hiaku limits? LoL). It's pure truth, and I wish more people would see that. Beautiful. Perfect. Kudos.
Zaijen
-Shan-
konnichi wa
*adds to favs* I love this. It's the most perfect hiaku I've ever read! No extra words (how CAN you when you're limited as much as a hiaku limits? LoL). It's pure truth, and I wish more people would see that. Beautiful. Perfect. Kudos.
Zaijen
-Shan-
11/25/2007 c1 81Princess-anna57
Well written. GREAT job. Flows well and is very powerful, so true. Write on.
~Anna~ ^_^
81Princess-anna57Well written. GREAT job. Flows well and is very powerful, so true. Write on.
~Anna~ ^_^