for It only takes a minute8/30/2013 c13 C
It is really rude to a mark a story as complete when it is actually to the point of never being finished. No one wants to waste time like that. Least of all me.
It is really rude to a mark a story as complete when it is actually to the point of never being finished. No one wants to waste time like that. Least of all me.
7/17/2009 c3 romanticatheart09
Wow I can't believe she's gotten a abortion before! Can't wait to read the rest!
Wow I can't believe she's gotten a abortion before! Can't wait to read the rest!
7/17/2009 c1 romanticatheart09
That was super cute I love the flirtation going on between Charlie and Alex.
That was super cute I love the flirtation going on between Charlie and Alex.
7/12/2009 c13 iforgotthisexisted
Wow it was good, really really good. I really felt for Alex when Charlie left and sun he met Noah. It was insanely well written. Good job =D
Wow it was good, really really good. I really felt for Alex when Charlie left and sun he met Noah. It was insanely well written. Good job =D
2/3/2009 c6 
1someone0is0me1
It's an ok story. I mean the details are sorta ok but it feels like the characters don't even have any depth or something.
1someone0is0me1It's an ok story. I mean the details are sorta ok but it feels like the characters don't even have any depth or something.
11/3/2008 c12 M. R. Roland
Don't change anything! Keep it the way it is. Just continue writing the sequel.
Don't change anything! Keep it the way it is. Just continue writing the sequel.
10/30/2008 c12 Strangely Natural
Charlie throughout the story seems to be a pretty weak and fickle girl, fluttering from choice to life-changing choice like a butterfly from flower to flower with no real regard for the consequences she causes with her naive foolishness. She hurt her mother, Alex, Noah, others and consequently Alice with so much instability. She should try harder, or else she'll alienate everyone because she's undependable and shallow. Also the depth of emotion and character that this story showed briefly in the beginning disappeared just as fast as it came, pity, it showed promise. But chapter 9's ending was good, she did the right thing, Noah deserves his own fresh start with someone that loves HIM, and Alice's parent's need to reconnect which they did quite nicely.
The rewrite sounds intriguing but also mildly depressing, but that doesn't matter as long as it ends well, addresses the questions it raises and has strong development throughout.
Charlie throughout the story seems to be a pretty weak and fickle girl, fluttering from choice to life-changing choice like a butterfly from flower to flower with no real regard for the consequences she causes with her naive foolishness. She hurt her mother, Alex, Noah, others and consequently Alice with so much instability. She should try harder, or else she'll alienate everyone because she's undependable and shallow. Also the depth of emotion and character that this story showed briefly in the beginning disappeared just as fast as it came, pity, it showed promise. But chapter 9's ending was good, she did the right thing, Noah deserves his own fresh start with someone that loves HIM, and Alice's parent's need to reconnect which they did quite nicely.
The rewrite sounds intriguing but also mildly depressing, but that doesn't matter as long as it ends well, addresses the questions it raises and has strong development throughout.
10/23/2008 c12 Lady R
Can't wait to see the re-write. Sounds like some major drama gonna be going on. I don't really remember all the characters except for Alex and Charlie, but I'm willing to give the re-write a shot.
Can't wait to see the re-write. Sounds like some major drama gonna be going on. I don't really remember all the characters except for Alex and Charlie, but I'm willing to give the re-write a shot.
6/1/2008 c11 hockeygirl1489
Great story. I loved the plot. It all seemed as though it really happened and you were just telling the story.
Great story. I loved the plot. It all seemed as though it really happened and you were just telling the story.