for Scott1/30/2008 c1 disabled account
This is absolutely lovely. I love how subtle and lyrical the imagery is. Even I can't offer any criticisms. Adieu, Kat
This is absolutely lovely. I love how subtle and lyrical the imagery is. Even I can't offer any criticisms. Adieu, Kat
1/22/2008 c1 hey maria
The ghazal is my favorite form of structured poetry (I haven't written one in a while though) and this is a beautiful one. I love this poem. There are so many lines that stand out to me, like "Secret tunnels through Jerusalem and it’s not where I found faith; it was you/that found my faith for me" and "and you/whispered me into my own dreams until my name became the breath/between your lips." Keep writing. ( + favorites)
The ghazal is my favorite form of structured poetry (I haven't written one in a while though) and this is a beautiful one. I love this poem. There are so many lines that stand out to me, like "Secret tunnels through Jerusalem and it’s not where I found faith; it was you/that found my faith for me" and "and you/whispered me into my own dreams until my name became the breath/between your lips." Keep writing. ( + favorites)
12/3/2007 c1 
105Maggot Blood
This is a very different angle that you have written in but your style is still very visible. This is maybe your most complexe and spell binding poem to date, and the man that it is dedicated for is very luckey indeed. Great work.
Maggot
105Maggot BloodThis is a very different angle that you have written in but your style is still very visible. This is maybe your most complexe and spell binding poem to date, and the man that it is dedicated for is very luckey indeed. Great work.
Maggot
11/28/2007 c1 2The Lady dreams Imagine
I'm going to say right off the bat that I don't understand what a load of this implies, even though I have general ideas. But, as hypocritical as I feel saying this (seeing as I'm not even sure I understand this the right way), this is absolutely beautiful. The visualization is powerful. Rock on.
LI
2The Lady dreams ImagineI'm going to say right off the bat that I don't understand what a load of this implies, even though I have general ideas. But, as hypocritical as I feel saying this (seeing as I'm not even sure I understand this the right way), this is absolutely beautiful. The visualization is powerful. Rock on.
LI