4/28/2015 c27 TheLuckyJinx
This story was good. I think a sequel could work or maybe just an epilogue really letting us know how great everything went. :)
This story was good. I think a sequel could work or maybe just an epilogue really letting us know how great everything went. :)
7/1/2014 c27 krc101
its good. could be better, but its good.
its good. could be better, but its good.
6/23/2014 c27 1kanary98
This story is so sweet! I absolutely love it. I love it, I love it, I love it! Amazing job!
This story is so sweet! I absolutely love it. I love it, I love it, I love it! Amazing job!
2/24/2013 c24 unknown
I like the story but keeping Rylee from her real father just because he cheated isnt fair. A lot if ppl cheat esp when their young but keeping her from Tyler is selfish. Thats for Casey not Rylee.
I like the story but keeping Rylee from her real father just because he cheated isnt fair. A lot if ppl cheat esp when their young but keeping her from Tyler is selfish. Thats for Casey not Rylee.
7/1/2012 c27 original is original
i just love your story gosh i wish more guys that ryder exsisted, i really hope you make a secuel to this i wanna what happend to casey's parents
i just love your story gosh i wish more guys that ryder exsisted, i really hope you make a secuel to this i wanna what happend to casey's parents
9/12/2011 c27 Esperanza12
I absolutly loved this story! It's so amazing. You're so talented. You should totally make a sequel!
I absolutly loved this story! It's so amazing. You're so talented. You should totally make a sequel!
7/28/2011 c11 witeaya
the story has interesting plot so far but all that doesnt matter cause the pace of the story or rather the pace of the relationship was way too fast.what, she met him 2 days ago and knew that he's the one he wanted to be her baby's father? falling for each other in least that 24 hours? spilling each other's secrets and feeling within that 2 days? what a complete bull. they didnt know one another for goodness sake. it's annoying when i read unconvincing stories like this.it's a such waste bc your writing style is good.
the story has interesting plot so far but all that doesnt matter cause the pace of the story or rather the pace of the relationship was way too fast.what, she met him 2 days ago and knew that he's the one he wanted to be her baby's father? falling for each other in least that 24 hours? spilling each other's secrets and feeling within that 2 days? what a complete bull. they didnt know one another for goodness sake. it's annoying when i read unconvincing stories like this.it's a such waste bc your writing style is good.
7/22/2011 c27 1TiPSy111
I'm in love with this story ! But I just wanted to point put that you left two parts of the story line unresolved, we never got what happend with Tyler or if Heather said yes! Is there a sequel I missed? Other wise a truely good story is spoiled by rushing it to be the end :) there is so much more you can do with this story as the plots are already set up :)
I'm in love with this story ! But I just wanted to point put that you left two parts of the story line unresolved, we never got what happend with Tyler or if Heather said yes! Is there a sequel I missed? Other wise a truely good story is spoiled by rushing it to be the end :) there is so much more you can do with this story as the plots are already set up :)
7/19/2011 c1 jessicarp
Love your history!
upload soon plz =D
33333
Love your history!
upload soon plz =D
33333
6/4/2011 c27 XDon't-Panic-SkyX
amazing story! It was sooo cute and extremely funny. It was the most dramatic fictionpress story I've read so far! Write more stories mmkay?
amazing story! It was sooo cute and extremely funny. It was the most dramatic fictionpress story I've read so far! Write more stories mmkay?
4/19/2011 c27 Contest-girl
I just want to tell you that this story made me cry. Like real full out bawling. You did a very good job and I want to cry some more now. Beautiful job. I just can't help but think of all the lingering questions. Anyway, lovely.
I just want to tell you that this story made me cry. Like real full out bawling. You did a very good job and I want to cry some more now. Beautiful job. I just can't help but think of all the lingering questions. Anyway, lovely.