for A Deathly Vision3/26/2008 c1 
2KhefriSun
O! Spoky! "I am your savor(?) I am your death, 'the darkness rasps," that line sent a shiver down my spine.
2KhefriSunO! Spoky! "I am your savor(?) I am your death, 'the darkness rasps," that line sent a shiver down my spine.
3/21/2008 c1 7Rooster Skull
Sorry for alerting last time. It was an accident.
Wonderful imagery, like always.
"Your eyes open to the bloody moon/“I am your savor. I am your death,”/the darkness rasps."
Beautiful, and I have actually heard that in the wind before. Kind of creepy, but it is true. I think I can relate to this poem a lot. Keep up the amazing work.
~~ AmarokUchiha ~~
7Rooster SkullSorry for alerting last time. It was an accident.
Wonderful imagery, like always.
"Your eyes open to the bloody moon/“I am your savor. I am your death,”/the darkness rasps."
Beautiful, and I have actually heard that in the wind before. Kind of creepy, but it is true. I think I can relate to this poem a lot. Keep up the amazing work.
~~ AmarokUchiha ~~
12/3/2007 c1 13poisonedpassions
Wow. Theres something about that poem, it draws you into thinking. Almost like a trance.
Definitely well written, with amazing imagery.
Keep writing!
Keep your head high
**.
13poisonedpassionsWow. Theres something about that poem, it draws you into thinking. Almost like a trance.
Definitely well written, with amazing imagery.
Keep writing!
Keep your head high
**.
11/30/2007 c1 81Princess-anna57
Interesting piece. There's always room for improvement but I think it's fine as it is. Great job. Thank you for sharing. Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^
81Princess-anna57Interesting piece. There's always room for improvement but I think it's fine as it is. Great job. Thank you for sharing. Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^