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3/26/2008 c1 2KhefriSun
O! Spoky! "I am your savor(?) I am your death, 'the darkness rasps," that line sent a shiver down my spine.
3/21/2008 c1 7Rooster Skull
Sorry for alerting last time. It was an accident.

Wonderful imagery, like always.

"Your eyes open to the bloody moon/“I am your savor. I am your death,”/the darkness rasps."

Beautiful, and I have actually heard that in the wind before. Kind of creepy, but it is true. I think I can relate to this poem a lot. Keep up the amazing work.

~~ AmarokUchiha ~~
12/3/2007 c1 13poisonedpassions
Wow. Theres something about that poem, it draws you into thinking. Almost like a trance.

Definitely well written, with amazing imagery.

Keep writing!

Keep your head high

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11/30/2007 c1 81Princess-anna57
Interesting piece. There's always room for improvement but I think it's fine as it is. Great job. Thank you for sharing. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

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